Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constrains of established habits and attitudes.
When talking about the necessary condition to success, some people think that just follow the experience is an important thing while others think imagination is more important than experience. Many parents think that with the time using to do useless imagine, it will be better to use the time on doing exercise and established habits and attitudes so that children can have more experience. With the accumulation of experience, people will be more adept to their work so that they can have a better performance. However, I think imagination is more powerful than experience and sometimes imagination can break out established habits and attitudes and make surprisingly achievement.
Most of people thinks that experience is more important because what you have to do is just to repeat the simple operation of the work. With repeating again and again, people will be experienced in the field. Comparing with experience, imagination is free with many unreliable possibilities that would just waste the time. However, because imagination have infinitive possibilities without the limit of established habits and attitudes, people can try different ideas and find out the best solution as well as find out the way to optimize their ideas and make it possible to come true. With the help of imagination, people work out different invents.
What’s more, with the help of imagination, people will breakout established habits and attitudes and discover a new world. Keeping repeat the same work again and again will make people feel bored. With imagination bringing new ideas, our life will be more colorful and interesting. Every week Google encourage its stuff spends a whole afternoon time just to show their imagination to find out how can the company work out new ideas and products. As one of the most famous company in the world, many consumers are willing to choose their products. And I believe the imagination is a powerful way to make people and company keep innovate new products and keep them energetic.
Besides, even though imagination is important, experience is also necessary for people head to their success. Imagination can instruct people thinking about new possibilities while experience can help people avoid mistakes and highlight the necessary efforts. As the most famous inventor in the world, Thomas Edition tried thousands kind of material to make sure lightbulb can working stable. With his considerable accumulation of experience, we could light up our night. With over one thousand items invented in his life, Thomas Edition still indicates that even though ideas are very important, working hard plays a same important role. Though imagination help find out the target, experience helps make the target come true.
Comparing with experience, it is no doubt that imagination is a more valuable asset. With the infinitive possibility of imagination, people can break out established habits and attitudes and make our life more colorful and interesting. However, experience is also necessary to make ideas come true. With the help of imagination and the support of experience, our life will be better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...s and make surprisingly achievement. Most of people thinks that experience is more importan...
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN
Message: Use simply 'repeating'.
... the simple operation of the work. With repeating again and again, people will be experienced i...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, still, well, while, i think, kind of, no doubt, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 39.0 12.9106741573 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2640.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 500.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85244877255 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 850.5 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1009937527 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30277756011 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101620667636 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803513351352 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202661737694 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454800899717 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.