Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The claim states that imagination is more important than experience, as people can imagine freely if they are not constrained by the established habits and attitudes. However, I fully disagree with the claim and the reason it is based, since both imagination and experience are vital in contributing to one’s achievement and people are able to thinking imaginatively even with their existed attitudes.
Admittedly, many adults are confined by their past experiences, and thus are incapable of thinking creatively compared to children who don’t have too many attitudes. Under the fierce competition of modern society, most people tend to finish their work in a quick and easy way. Such a behaviour pattern leads them to think less about whether there are better solutions to the work. Thus, they accumulate more working experience, but have difficulties dealing with new tasks which need imagination. On the contrary, children, who do not have much experience toward specific areas, sometimes can come out with creative thoughts which shock many adults, for example, many children use their imagination to draw pictures about the world, which is totally different from the depiction in the media, in outer space, while adults could only draw things according to their existing recognition.
However, there are also many people who both have the imaginative thinking ability and experiences from their everyday lives. For example, Picasso, one of the famous artists in the world, had created many different types of drawings through his hard work to combine his previous drawing styles with creative thoughts. It is imprudent to assert that all his workings are because of his imagination. In fact, he was a person who experienced a lot in his life time, both the good and bad things that contributed to his marvellous paintings. Also, he made the full use of his experience to avert many mistakes in his career.
In sum, although it is undeniable that people’s existing habits and attitudes do have an impact on their imagination, they can still reconcile these two elements to both think creatively and using past experience to avoid many mistakes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...edly, many adults are confined by their past experiences, and thus are incapable of thinking cre...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...amous artists in the world, had created many different types of drawings through his hard work...
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Line 5, column 453, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...s a person who experienced a lot in his life time, both the good and bad things that cont...
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Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...ents to both think creatively and using past experience to avoid many mistakes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, in fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26224783862 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82384576875 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57060518732 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.0938991888 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.461538462 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182240375112 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741821975945 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882673437048 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128880173765 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103778840886 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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