Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Laws are created for the people, by the people. As we are moving forward, the type of problems faced by the society are changing. Laws and leagal systems are enforced to help solve the problems. The prompt suggests that many of the problems of the modern society can not be solved by laws and legal systems. I strongly agree witht he author for three reasons.
Every human has a different way of thinking, what might be one's "right", might be others 'wrong". People have different point of views, which often leads to creation of groups with similar mindsets. These opinions are usually contradictory. Enforcing a law or a legal system might help control an issue by ruling in the favor of one of the groups, making the other group rebel. By making a decision in favor of both groups, peace can be maintained for a short time. However, this does not solve the problem. For example, some people are against abortion, while others think it is a womans right. With the recent overturn in the ruling in the Untied States, states are now allowed to ban abortion. This has led to huge protests. However, those who abhor abortion are happy with the decision. The ruling has not solved the problem, it has made people who support abortion, fight against it. This example shows that it is very difficult to solve a lot of problems by passing laws as people have different mindsets.
Laws are usually made considering the welfare of citizens in their mind. It is however, not possible to keep everyone happy and make a decision in everyones favor, especially in countries with large population. Even the most thought out and considerate laws might upset some people. Take for instance, a law did not allow people from other parts of the country to buy land in Kashmir. This law was changed recently, allowing citizens from all across the country to buy lands and houses in Kashmir. Many people were afraid that this law, will take away the independence and the identity of Kashmir. Violent protests were carried out and internet was banned in the area for a very long time. This shows us that even the most thoguht out laws are not capable of solving the issues of the modern society.
Even if laws are passed to solve the problems, people usually manage to find a way around the laws. Hence, the laws end up having no effect on the soceity. For instance, adult content has been banned in India. People still manage to use virtual proxy networks and watch it. No matter what the law is, people manage to come up with a solution. Laws can be enforced, and they can reduce the problems but they are often but not able to solve the issue completely.
However,in some scenarios, passing a law can help solve a problem and maintain peace amongst people. Xonsider the example of the law enforced in Delhi, India to reduce pollution. Although, this is not the case for most problems. Most problems today can not be solved by laws and legal systems because of the eclectic opinions of the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'authors'.
Suggestion: authors
...egal systems. I strongly agree witht he author for three reasons. Every human has ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ree witht he author for three reasons. Every human has a different way of think...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ws as people have different mindsets. Laws are usually made considering the we...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...o solve the issue completely. However,in some scenarios, passing a law can help ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2479.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 526.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71292775665 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41430271108 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469581749049 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 772.2 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.2370786517 173% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0491405522 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.8285714286 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.0285714286 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94285714286 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25581266319 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668756403062 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539339489938 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162809656502 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335087036146 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.