Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us.
Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take.
In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented
The world is a huge and a complex place. Every single creature is more complex than it appears. The prompt suggest that while some people believe that we have acheieved a much better understanding of the world with scientic discoveries, others believe that science has shown us that the world is more complex than we realized. I agree with the author that science has given us a much greater understanding of the world around us.
Nature is quite complex, each and every process that takes place in nature is often a result of multiple steps taken. Humans have always studied these processes. For example, a plant requires sufficient water, light and the seed needs to be sowed at a particula distance from the ground for the plant to flourish. With science, humans have identified how plants make their food with the help of photosynthesis. It seems like a rather simple process to the naked eye but it's quite complex. The above example shows us that science has exposed us to the complexities of the the world but at the same time it has provided us more information about all the processes. This gives us a much better understanding of the things happening around us.
Science has helped humans increase their life span significantly. The diseases that once had no cure, like fever, are now easily treatable. Humans have gathered a much deeper understanding of how teir body works, which has helped them to find the root cause and make medicines to cure the diseases. For example, in a recent breakthrough, for the first time ever a drug test revealed that no more cancer cells wre found in all the patients it was tested on. This shows us that humans are aware of the the infinite complexities present, but based on the understanding they have of the world, they are able to find much more information.
In previous times, it was unpredicatble when there would be a storm, when it would rain, when there would be an earthquake and how bad it would be. With science, the humankind is now able to simplify such complexities. Humans are now able to predict when it would rain, when it would storm, if there's a chance of an earthqauke or a tsunami. Suppose, a farmer needs to grow some crops that are best fit for rainy season, however, he has no clue when it would rain. Now, with the help of science he can fetch the report about the weather conditions in the upcoming few months and decide if it would fit his crop or not. Science has exposed us to more complexities but it has also given us a much deeper understanding of the world.
Altough, in some scenarios, like as we know the ocean is highly complex, science has shown us that the world is more complex than we understand. However, sceince is continuously workign to provide more information on these complexities as well.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...e has exposed us to the complexities of the the world but at the same time it has provi...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...e has exposed us to the complexities of the the world but at the same time it has provi...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: FIRST_TIME_EVER[1]
Message: Use simply 'first time'.
Suggestion: first time
...mple, in a recent breakthrough, for the first time ever a drug test revealed that no more cance...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... This shows us that humans are aware of the the infinite complexities present, but base...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... This shows us that humans are aware of the the infinite complexities present, but base...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
... it would rain, when it would storm, if theres a chance of an earthqauke or a tsunami....
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ormation on these complexities as well.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2303.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 492.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68089430894 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63658157407 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463414634146 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1407282919 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9583333333 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45833333333 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430741974489 0.243740707755 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128271633398 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156588020673 0.0758088955206 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274477026241 0.150359130593 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161463784072 0.0667264976115 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...e has exposed us to the complexities of the the world but at the same time it has provi...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...e has exposed us to the complexities of the the world but at the same time it has provi...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: FIRST_TIME_EVER[1]
Message: Use simply 'first time'.
Suggestion: first time
...mple, in a recent breakthrough, for the first time ever a drug test revealed that no more cance...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... This shows us that humans are aware of the the infinite complexities present, but base...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... This shows us that humans are aware of the the infinite complexities present, but base...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
... it would rain, when it would storm, if theres a chance of an earthqauke or a tsunami....
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ormation on these complexities as well.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2303.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 492.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68089430894 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63658157407 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463414634146 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1407282919 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9583333333 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45833333333 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430741974489 0.243740707755 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128271633398 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156588020673 0.0758088955206 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274477026241 0.150359130593 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161463784072 0.0667264976115 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.