Claim Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system Reason Laws cannot change what is in people s hearts or minds Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

Law s are nothing but a set of rules that are be implement by the government authority. This set of rules are put together to help the citizens, protect them and even provide the right of the citizens. Law can be a rule that is to be followed by every citizens, breaking a law can be punishable. From over speeding a vehicle to providing false document at the time of tax payment, both the actions are punishable but the punishment can varies on how severe the crime is.
Laws and legal system are put in action just so that the criminal are put behind the bars. It even arises a peace of mind for the citizens of nations, that even if a crime has taken place there is someone present to take the action against it. It is true that just by imposing a set of rules or law and to have a proper legal system - that looks into all the public matters, the problem in the modern society will be solved. But the laws try to maintain a sensibility in the mind of people, that breaking the law will be punishable.
Moving forward, it is true that just by imposing a list of laws that people are aware about, and even know the punishment that the authorities will take. People tend to commit crimes and break rules isn't ? There can be multiple reason why do they do so. One can be jobless for couple of years and need to feed his family take care of his wife, child and parents. To do one might find out the best way to make money over night by, robbing a bank or even a house. Knowing that he might be charged under multiple charges, he still commits the crime. Why so? The poverty made he do so, or the way the way he though to make over overnight.
It is also equally important to have, a large force who look for a crime to take place and reduce those crimes. Let consider an example of City, where the population is in millions, and to keep the crime rate low there need be a large enough police and legal force to look forward. But if for such a populations of 10 million people, there are only 1 million police officer, it will definelty put a lot of pressure on the department, to handle and maintain peace. Therefore it is equally important to have a proper legal force and not just laws.
To conclude, the number of crimes can be reduced but not completely stopped. Implementing new laws according to the modern problems is equally important. Also laws cannot change what is in the mind of people but can arise a sensibility among the people that breaking the law can put the behind bars or be punishable.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are nothing but a set of rules that are be implement by the government authority. ...
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...s are punishable but the punishment can varies on how severe the crime is. Law...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, therefore, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3023255814 5.05705443957 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34275780383 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46511627907 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7314012316 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.40909090909 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180278372967 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556558975299 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623070859781 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114690641629 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075318922569 0.0667264976115 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 12.1639044944 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, therefore, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments