A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you t | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The national curriculum is managed and handled by the central authority. The main idea behind the idea for all the students to study the same curriculum is just so that they all can be under the same umbrella. Before college, the primary subjects the students might have in there curriculum will be the same for example Science, Mathematics, History, Geography, English and couple of optional subjects. Which won't change for the majority of them.
The main idea for the students to have the same curriculum across the nation is just so that, the students belowing to any group community, or religion are provided with equal knowledge, without any organization interfering with the study material. This idea will maintain the quality of education the students get in the early stage of there educational journey. As we all know that primary education plays an important role in the overall development of a student, and just so is the quality.
As the issue suggest, the national curriculum need to be different as the students enter the college is quiet obvious to be true. The main idea to look for is, after a certain limit, it will be quiet difficult for the national authority to maintain the quality of curriculum they provide. As the students enter the college they have a wide range of specialization to choose from - Computer science, Arts, Human science, Chemistry Biology and many more. One can choose from a variety of option and move ahead with the subjects.
If the nation provide the same curriculum for all the fields, there won't be any difference in this fields. It will be the like rolling the same die. As the basic education of all the students was maintain the same for all students, it is quiet obvious the base of there further education life is concrete. Now, moving forward the students will be able to tackle any problem.
Concluding to the issue, I totally agree with the idea, that a nation should provide the same academic curriculum to all the students before college. Post school life, that is when they enter there college, the curriculum shouldn't be planned by the nation and its educational authority. As the there will be huge gap between multiple specialization, that a student want's to pursue. Therefore it will be difficult for the nation to maintain the curriculum in college.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90330788804 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64280968697 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437659033079 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9253432165 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.421052632 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6842105263 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.89473684211 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261127385634 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957028972233 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553702152183 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171701111048 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373987251932 0.0667264976115 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments