Claim The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supportin | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Claim: The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

On a keynote, about passion and interest go hand in hand, and when they couple up together best ideas will definitely arise, and when this interest is more relevant to the things we more likely to connect with the interest grows up by 2 folds. Its is a human tendency to connect with what we like to do, the interest in the things also increases.
The best idea or creative idea that human beings have given to the world have a direct link with the connect the person makes with the field. Mark Zucenbergs idea to connect the student of Harvard university with a large group of other student has arise from the passionate interest in the field of computer science and a passion of enterprenuer skill, leading to the birth of one of the biggest Technology computer Facebook, now known as Meta.
Let us understand more about the passion, with a minute detail, by considering an example of Alex a undergrad student studying for an mathematics degree. Alex when with a group of people who are discussing about a newly launched multiple player game. As Alex has passion about and keen interest in playing game, he will be more likely to open up and talk about the games and it pros and cons, similarly if Alex is asked to suggest any improvement that can make the game better will give a rise to multiple idea on improvement, where as when asked to provide a optimal solution for an mathematical problem in his university the bombarding of creative and best ideas will be not the best of it kind.
The key thing to notice in the above paragraph is the tendency in which human things. The studies by multiple research paper have even proven, that the surplus of neurons increases drasctically when an topic that is liked by the person is discussed about or even when the while reading a book or article the action in brain is rapid, concluding that the interest in the field can bring up great idea in the mind of a person.
At last, the passionate interest plays a vital role in the rise of creative idea, if a person work with like minded group of people the bombarding of ideas is rapid. Its been said like minded people change bring up more ideas and the best idea arise from passionate interest in commonplace things

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44317416489 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4675 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.711035139 60.3974514979 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.454545455 118.986275619 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3636363636 23.4991977007 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190354930388 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890179521968 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410182079554 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118233090487 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375911559127 0.0667264976115 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 48.8420337079 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments