Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
It has been claimed in the issue that problems of modern society can not be solved by the laws and legal system as laws do not change the ethics and values of the people. To understand this statement, firstly, it is necessary to apprehened the word law. What and how exactly the law and legal system works. Law is created by the people for the people to punish them for their immoral deeds. Whenever any crime happens at a place it is the duty of the law system to handle the situation and incarcerate the person. Although law can not mandate the emotions of the people on the right track but without it people will forget the difference between right and wrong. Therefore, whether it is modern society problen or anything else, laws are necessary to clarify the difference between the two.
Firstly, as we are living in the age of the internet, there are plenty of social media networking sites on which people post comments, photos and things related to their personal life. Fake profiles can be easily created and these can be used to spread the wrong information about any person. Celebrities are trolled every other day. Moreover, several fraud bank transitions are done, debit card pins are traced by the theives and they steal money. All of this comes under the digitalized problems of the modern society. For this reason, several countries have created laws and regulations under digital crime as it was almost impossible to control this without any legal action.
Secondly, a famous company was under charges of the leakage of the data privacy was Facebook after which laws of the data privacy was revised again and data could not be taken by the Graph API anymore. Due to this legal action, personalised data of the people have been saved and is not in danger anymore.
Thirdly, islamic countries have strict laws when it comes to crime towards women. They take quick action and therefore people do not commit heinous actions towards women. On the other hand countris like India, there are not strict laws against the increasing crime rate. For this reason, people has no control whatsoever on their deeds. Also, lack of moral and value education also plays a vital role in this. Therefore, it is necessary that to handle problems of modern society it is necessary to amend strict laws as people's hearts and minds can sway but rules can not.
In the end, I would say that laws and legal activities are important in day to day life. As crime has also set his foot in virtual world which is difficult to track down. Therefore, laws and legal actions are required for modern society problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ities are important in day to day life. As crime has also set his foot in virtual ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75330396476 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30872311252 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486784140969 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2213084696 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9166666667 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45833333333 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272629108141 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769238321024 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670776546695 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147088752018 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688377258674 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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