In the modern society, people are being more and more egoistic due to the limited chances and resources. Therefore, more and more discussions about self-interest and altruism are being popular topics and quickly come to a conclusion that because all cations -even those that seem to be done for other people -are based on self-interest, no act id done purely for the benefit of others. However, in my opinion, I disagree with the reason and the claim given.
Admitted, there is no denying the fact that people are becoming more and more indifferent with the surrounding problems because of the rapid pace. They don’t want to waste time and energy on irrelevant person, especially there is no benefit for them. For instance, in China, there are so many actors or celebrities, they always want to be popular or acquire good reputation through doing social voluntary activities.
However, the statement is too pessimistic to discredit the nature of humankind. As we all know, parents play a great and altruistic role in everyone’s life. They always pay everything they have and want to give their children the best living condition, but they don’t require return. Moreover, our best friends, who always company with us and help us overcome the hard situations, don’t demand you to pay back.
In addition, the claim and the reason are too extreme and overlook some exceptional circumstances. In fact, there are so many vocations and practitioners who are sacrificing their life for saving others’ life. For example, during the epidemic of COVID-19, facing the unknown virus and the possibility of infecting, but the nurses and doctors didn’t quail and give up, they undertake the responsibility and assign more priority on patients other than themselves. They are altruistic and didn’t betray their belief of their duty.
All in all, while the overall society is becoming cold and indifferent, we can’t disregard there still are so many people and practitioners, they are not just concerned with their interest, but being altruistic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20481927711 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81693987148 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563253012048 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7786449806 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.2 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.21951772744 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338625438973 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896205085356 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137419839789 0.0758088955206 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174528715171 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168562058544 0.0667264976115 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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