Claim: The surest indicator of a great nation must be the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Reason: Great achievements by a nation's rulers, artists, or scientists will ensure a good life for the majority of that nation's people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Do the achievements of a nation's rulers, artists, or scientists perfectly indicates the well-being of majority of its public? While many critics might accede to the idea that the achievements of rulers, artists, or scientists perfectly mirrors the good life of its hoi pollio, it is everything but the final truth. As far as I am concerned, I believe these achievements reflects people's well-being to some extent; however, these acquisitions might not be able to reflect the prosperity of the whole nation. The correlation between achievements garnered by national heroes - rulers, artists, scientist - need case-by-case assay.
Those critics who would argue that the surest indicator of great nation is the piles of achievements amassed by its rulers, artists, and scientists might give the example of China. China won its first Olympic medal in 1984. In the Olympic of this year, China got 64 medals - including 28 gold - securing third position following USA and the Great Britain. In this period of 1984-2016, China has made its economic capacity of some 17 trillions to boot uplifting the life of millions of indigent Chinese people. Now, the critics might argue that example of China makes clear that athlete's achievements is the mirror of people's well-being, for athlete's achievements and the people's livelihood augmented together. However critics need to know that beside this tremendous change in China, nearly 200 million people are still under poverty line set by World Bank of $1.25 per day earning. This has not been represented by the athletes performance in the Olympics. How is it possible for Fu (Chinese swimmer) to represent the indigence of these 200 million people while swimming in the Rio De Janeiro? Similarly, in North Korea, some political sycophants - or political elites - might have a good life, yet the life of general public is like hell. Likewise, North Korean scientists have achieved many things in recent times: they know how to built sophisticated missiles. They don't know how to erase the pain of public, however.
Likewise, India is one of the fastest growing economy having economic volume of some 2 trillion. Indian players, in the summer Olympic of 2016, are garnering awards, scientists are discovering many innovative techniques, and the politicians are getting exposure in different national and international forums which don't represent the fact that India is also a country of one third of the poorest of the world. The images of those indigents, who don't have access to clean water and sufficient foods are not represented by the Castle of Sachin Tendulkar.
Now the crucial point to discuss is what are the things that represent the people's life and their well-being. Surely, access to education, clean water, health service at an affordable price and many other factors directly pertaining to the people's elementary needs perfectly mirrors the greatness of a nation; a hospital in each village of rural India reflects India's greatness rather than the big building of Amitab Bachhan (Popular Bollywood Star) in Mumbai.
Finally, at the end of the day, it is clear that the achievement of politicians, artist, or scientists is not enough to represent the greatness, or the general welfare of people, of a nation. Several other indicators - like sanitation, access to safe water, enough food, education, health service, and so forth - reflects the greatness of any state. The examples, and the robust arguments, presented above are to shore up my position.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'likewise', 'similarly', 'so', 'still', 'third', 'well', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2875 0.240241500013 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.128125 0.157235817809 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0859375 0.0880659088768 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.040625 0.0497285424764 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.021875 0.0444667217837 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1140625 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0359375 0.0406280797675 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80952169919 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0234375 0.030933414821 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0015625 0.0016655270985 94% => OK
Determiners: 0.1078125 0.0997080785238 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.009375 0.0249443105267 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125 0.0148568991511 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3515.0 2732.02544248 129% => OK
No of words: 571.0 452.878318584 126% => OK
Chars per words: 6.15586690018 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.58838876751 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.401050788091 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.318739054291 0.280924506359 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.210157618214 0.200843997647 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14711033275 0.132149295362 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80952169919 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 219.290929204 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520140105079 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 64.7586874527 55.4138127331 117% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.8260869565 23.380412469 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7662042211 59.4972553346 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.826086957 141.124799967 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8260869565 23.380412469 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.674092028746 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.21349557522 269% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 56.6999923856 51.4728631049 110% => OK
Elegance: 2.29508196721 1.64882698954 139% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485180908211 0.391690518653 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125652372612 0.123202303941 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0733500569402 0.077325440228 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.546740604057 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170814536176 0.149214159877 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193817873187 0.161403998019 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126779527081 0.0892212321368 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.508583363495 0.385218514788 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.034978184097 0.0692045440612 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34175516337 0.275328986314 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100336999989 0.0653680567796 153% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.