Claim: While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self-satisfaction, it should really be a source of embarrassment.
Reason: Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation.
Boredom is one such cliché thing when the person is either tired of doing repetitive job or rather lazy to do tasks.The reason is completely acceptable and it is explained with certain examples.
Firstly,The most important for any person to be successful is self-motivation if he is not motivated in what to do things probably like if a school kid is not motivated to study while exams and not watching t. v. as he is bored and later he would fail.Similarly if an employee of a company is not self-driven to finish the tasks and deadlines then he might not get a promotion.
Secondly,While there are plethora of reasons why boredom is felt by people one such is also lacking of imagination like about career or to develop knowledge by learning new things instead of chasing the boredom by using social media or watching movies.In a survey conducted in united states of school children stated that students have lost the complete idea of thinking ability and imagining things rather doing it virtually.
Thirdly,The current generation is only focussed on work for a 9 to 5 job once it is done they get so tired that after that they choose a way to entertain themselves like partying or going mall etc.Instead they can read a book,do any social service this is probably as it does'nt give self-satisfaction.What if a scientist is bored and stops working? does'nt it effect the innovation of technology.If a doctor who is treating patients is rather seen bored of his job then how can he make the patient better?.It is time that everyone realize it as a source of embarrassment and not self-satisfied as we are entertaining ourself.
In the conclusion,agree with the claim and also the reason which should atleast not be seen lacking in any person instead exploiting the term boredom in every individual life so that it can make their life worth living and finding new ideas and innovations instead wasting time just by being selfish for own fun and happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84866468843 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05191111189 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563798219585 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 23.0359550562 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6370064411 60.3974514979 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 233.428571429 118.986275619 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 48.1428571429 23.4991977007 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 5.21951772744 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217502579549 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924108996826 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455171043641 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109078460925 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308118798643 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.5 14.1392134831 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 48.8420337079 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 12.1743820225 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.2143820225 189% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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