Claim: While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self-satisfaction, it should really be a source of embarrassment
Reason: Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation
The issues relating to boredom is being surfaced largely in the medias these days. Few decades ago, issue pertaining mental health used not to accentuated, whereas it is gaining more concern from the people presently. We all experience some sort of boredom in life; It is the matter of extent of boredom that makes an impact on our lives. The aforementioned prompt suggests that boredom must be a source of embarrassment rather than self satisfaction ; the author cites the supposition that boredom resulting from lack of imagination and self motivation to strengthen the argument. I believe the argument of author mostly invalid, for aligning boredom with embarrassment and for citing dull mind and pessimism with boredom. I will be further putting light on my standing with the help of three reasons which are mentioned in the paragraphs below.
To begin with, we all experience boredom in our life; it should not be treated as abnormal. Boredom should not be linked with the feeling of embarrassment. Instead, the people with boredom should be treated with love and compassion; they need love and affection form us. Some brilliant people, for instance, couldn’t have an interest on the activities he perform. If he feels embarrassed with it, he could perform unfavourable activities such as suicide. So if the particular person is motivated again, he could get new life. Hence, the claim of author in aligning boredom with embarrassment is not rational.
Likewise, boredom does not always result from insipid and diffident mind; some brilliant minded and optimistic individuals also could experience boredom in their life. As quote from Einsten goes by” the monotonous time stimulates creative mind”, it is common for any people to experience boredom in the life. Huge sense of boredom, for example, could motivate anyone to give their best in the coming day. These days, many examples are being put forth debunking he idea which links boredom with lack of imagination.
However, the author is true when mentioning that boredom should not be linked with the sense of self satisfaction. Oftentimes, people feel self satisfied in experiencing boredom. Although, boredom should not bring down anyone, it also should not be attached with the sense of complacency. Complacency with boredom could be far more detrimental. it could bring gloominess in life and could stymie people from achieving their goals.
To sum up, despite the three reasons mentioned above, this issue requires an expanded evaluation to develop a more concrete position. As far as I can tell, it is imperative that boredom should not be attached by a feeling of mortification and self satisfaction by anyone. Although Boredom can occasionally to all of us, chronic boredom should be treated with professional help.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, likewise, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance, sort of, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 450.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85410557851 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513333333333 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6637608104 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.96 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449956123916 0.243740707755 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144372303118 0.0831039109588 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960658514354 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279445377062 0.150359130593 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622210978415 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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