College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to

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College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

In the past few decades, higher education has significantly expanded to a wider population while it used to be limited to elites. Accordingly, there has been a great deal of discussion as to what purpose college education serves and should serve. Some argue, as the prompt states, that individuals should focus on the availability of jobs in the field when considering what to study. In contrast, others claim that it would be such a myopic approach. A careful analysis of an ever-changing and unpredictable labor market, coupled with the value of wider interdisciplinary studies lends credence to the view that individuals will benefit from looking beyond job availability.

The primary reason why individuals should be cautious when analyzing the availability of jobs is that today’s labor market may not be an accurate reflection of the future one. Whereas numerous bodies of research predict that half of the current jobs in the world will disappear in the next few decades, other analysts argue that it would not be the case. To illustrate this divided controversy, there is a growing concern that teachers, with the advent of ever-growing technologies such as MOOCs, will be replaced by machines. On the contrary, critics dispute this prediction by arguing that teachers who cannot only instruct but also guide will be needed more than ever in order to foster skills that machines are not armed with such as critical and creative thinking. As this debated is closely related to the ways in which society and its culture alike value education, it is extremely difficult to discount either of the sides. With this complexity of the future’s job market, therefore, it would not be advisable to solely focus on the availability of jobs that appears to exist now.

Another point that merits consideration is that a broader focus on multiple areas of study can be more beneficial than one that is strictly bound to the job availability in a specific field. To exemplify this, Steve Jobs at a commencement speech at Stanford University pinpointed the value of discovering how to “connect the dots” as a means of innovation. Although he was unable to understand the true value of liberal arts education when he was in college, where he took a calligraphy course, he later on realized that it undoubtedly built the strong foundation of the Mac computer, a groundbreaking gadget equipped with various artistic fonts. In retrospect, taking various subjects without limiting himself to one specific field based on its job availability enabled him to be one of the most successful visionaries and CEOs in the world. In this manner, when choosing what to study, students should not eliminate the possibility of studying multiple fields just because the current job market suggests otherwise.

Yet, although the examples above illustrate the limitations of the presented statement, we cannot go as far to conclusively dismiss the importance of considering the availability of jobs. In the United States of America, for instance, college debt has reached more than 1.3 trillion USD, an ever-increasing burden that surpasses the amount of mortgage loans. It is not unusual for a college graduate to graduate with 50,000 USD debt, which makes it rational for the individual to seek immediate employability. As it is this abysmal reality that pressures a considerable amount of students to choose a field of study based on employability, it is reasonable to argue that students may feel more empowered to pursue other options had the situation been better. Therefore, while employability is in reality one of the factors to take into account for a number of college students, it should not be the only factor.

In sum, while there are arguments to be made for both sides, it can be argued that college students may be better off looking beyond the availability of jobs when choosing a field of study. The uncertainty of the future job market as well as the value of a broader liberal arts education demonstrates the downside of doing so.

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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as well as', 'on the contrary']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245492371706 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.147018030513 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0832177531207 0.0880659088768 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0471567267684 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0291262135922 0.0444667217837 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151178918169 0.12292977631 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0443828016644 0.0406280797675 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9757934806 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0374479889043 0.030933414821 121% => OK
Particles: 0.00138696255201 0.0016655270985 83% => OK
Determiners: 0.105409153953 0.0997080785238 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0263522884882 0.0249443105267 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0249653259362 0.0148568991511 168% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4040.0 2732.02544248 148% => OK
No of words: 664.0 452.878318584 147% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0843373494 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.07623851424 4.58838876751 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382530120482 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296686746988 0.280924506359 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207831325301 0.200843997647 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137048192771 0.132149295362 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9757934806 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Unique words: 328.0 219.290929204 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493975903614 0.48968727796 101% => OK
Word variations: 63.0679531499 55.4138127331 114% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 28.8695652174 23.380412469 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8339651672 59.4972553346 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.652173913 141.124799967 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8695652174 23.380412469 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.739130434783 0.674092028746 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 58.5382399162 51.4728631049 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.9751552795 1.64882698954 120% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.53932312214 0.391690518653 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122805808315 0.123202303941 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.06972637231 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.56512662746 0.547984918172 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0953257628389 0.149214159877 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.241463761908 0.161403998019 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071718447599 0.0892212321368 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.541039283088 0.385218514788 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0234310599804 0.0692045440612 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.42081241812 0.275328986314 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174580010277 0.0653680567796 27% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.30420353982 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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