Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
The author infers that colleges and universities should demand their students to have experience of studying abroad. Indeed, studying abroad can be beneficial in that it can widen student's sight which society requires for and can provide better opportunity to study. However I disagree with this view in that studying in a foreign country is costly and there may be some cases that studying aboard is not good option.
Nowadays, society becomes more global and it requires people having large perspective and studying abroad can actually help students broaden their perspective. Studying abroad might also provide students more developed and superior education. For example, Elon Musk who is successful leader of Tesla born in Republic of South Africa but studied aboard in USA. Lee Kun-hee, a leader of Samsung also expand his perspective while studying in a foreign country. Without those, there are too many people who had expand their knowledge and sight by studying in a foreign country.
At first glance, the claim that author argues to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals that it omits some substantial concerns that should be addressed, thus not cogent enough. First of all we should consider the cost of studying aboard. Cost of studying is usually quite expensive. It includes not only tuition but also includes living fees, rental fees, textbooks, etc. While there may be some students who has strong wealth and do not regard the cost burdensome. However without a doubt, most of students would regard cost of studying abroad as expensive and mandating students to study in a foreign country could forestall their concentration on study.
What is more, for some students, there will be no need to study abroad because the universities in their country are already well developed and diversified. For instance let us consider a student who is majoring computer science in the United States. The universities in the United States had the most-updated and developed knowledge of Computer Science. Also more than 50% of students in the university are from other countries. Then he/she may not have any advantage of studying abroad and may not have willingness to study abroad paying high cost. Likewise, let us consider the student who studies vocal music in Italy. Since Italy has the best curriculum for studying vocal music, mandating student to study abroad is unjust.
I partially admit that studying in a foreign country could be great opportunity for students to widen their sight and learn most developed education. However I strongly assert that colleges should not mandate every students to spend at least one semester at a foreign country because it can hamper student's focus on study due to its expensive cost and studying abroad can not always assure better teach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, likewise, may, so, then, thus, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18901098901 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58704752129 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472527472527 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6374144074 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.652173913 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7826086957 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4347826087 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410729328031 0.243740707755 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118864669184 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948962726224 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260466330628 0.150359130593 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10887375536 0.0667264976115 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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