Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supp

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Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

Education is one of the most paramount necessities in one’s life, as it opens myriad of avenues for someone to pursue. Here the topic suggests that colleges and university should require their students to spent at least one semester studying in a foreign country. Personally, I completely agree with students going abroad for a semester exchange programme, but the “should require” part of enforcing it on them is where I have my reservations. Thus, I agree with the students going to foreign universities and expanding their mental aptitude’s horizon, the all or nothing around it seems excessive.
Firstly, when the student leaves the comfort of his protected environment and goes to a foreign land, then it opens a stage for them to go and learn about courses and life at a fleeting pace. In such situations, life keeps happening to you at a very fast pace, hence you tend to rise to the occasion and grow leaps and bounds both academically and emotionally. In accordance with that, going for a semester exchange program, can expose you to various new methods of teachings, help you get a fresh perspective on topics and it also familiarizes with you with the lifestyle of almost same aged people from around the world. This experience can also help you meet people from all walks of life and understand how different people tend to work in similar situations. Secondly, going to a foreign university can help you understand the various trends avenues that people are exploring within your field of expertise, and which in turn will help you make a more informed choice about your future. Building on that, such courses can help you access study material from other places, helping you develop a nuanced understanding of your domain.
Furthermore, moving on from the academic benefits to the positive effects this opportunity can have on your personal growth. These kinds of experiences can be a gold mine for experiencing new things on an expedited pace. One can actually learn the best parts of all the cultures and amalgamate to from your own cosmopolitan (alcohol pun intended) view to life. These beliefs and virtues will be of boon when you finally step into the corporate environment and must face new people every day. This time away from friends and family can also be of great assistance, to make you independent and prepare you for taking control of your life in the future.
Finally, before concluding, even though most of the statement has many positive aspects to make you consider it, but that can be done only if we are aware of the shortcomings of the “all or nothing” tone of the statement. These courses, however, academically, and emotionally enriching, are quite expensive and not everyone can afford the same. This goes on to cause a disparity of the education quality for colleagues just based on family’s economical status. The people who could not go to these programmes, will always have a sense of lacking from all their batchmates, causing them to feel excluded and underconfident just because they didn’t have enough monetary prowess. Moreover, students usually go onto enjoy their culture and visit places more than actually concentrating on upskilling themselves during that time.
In conclusion, students visiting foreign universities for at least a semester is a great idea, cause it offers them a path for academics and self-exploration packaged into one. This experience can help them shape themselves up for the rest of their lives, but they should not be forced or made be held responsible to forcefully go if it isn’t viable to the students.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 443, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...y for colleagues just based on family’s economical status. The people who could not go to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, at least, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 33.0505617978 194% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3005.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 600.0 442.535393258 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00833333333 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94923200384 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82517206949 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 312.0 215.323595506 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 948.6 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.424256279 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.590909091 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313780661637 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938605924479 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753623305495 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174167353563 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682428803034 0.0667264976115 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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