All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
College and universities play a major role in shaping and developing a student’s life, by preparing them for the benefit towards nations and life. Studying in foreign country and native country is totally different in many factors like design of course, living, culture and traditions etc. In my opinion, I mostly agree that at least one semester should be allowed to study in foreign country for three reasons.
To begin with, by studying in foreign country, a student will get exposed to outer parts of the world, which would directly help them in shaping their career and giving them a new perspective in life. For instance, in profession of photography, a particular student should be sent to foreign country like USA, Europe etc. which would help him/her in learning about the tradition and culture of that particular country. It also helps them in knowing the things related to their profession when they meet their type of likeminded people. When people visit foreign countries, they come out of their comfort zone and would eventually help them when, they visit that particular county in near future.
Further, some of the courses in their native country might not be good, but some other foreign country might be best or top notch in that particular field. For example, if we take computer science field as a course, everyone knows that USA is around 30 years ahead from rest of the world. If a student, choose computer science course in his/her native country and if college/university gives opportunity for them to study one semester in the USA, then they would learn so much of the field which they wouldn’t have learnt in their native country. They may even discover some unknown specializations in that field, which might interest them and they may choose that as their career. Hence, exposure across the globe is always benefitted.
Of course, some may argue that, sending their children to study requires huge amounts of funds, especially if they are from low currency country compared to the country they wanted to go. Hence, college and universities should help those types of students who are excellent in academics and wanted to pursue some extra chuck of knowledge by providing scholarships or giving them enough funding so that they complete their course without any problems. At last, college and universities should support the students who genuinely want to study abroad to boost their career.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...lar county in near future. Further, some of the courses in their native country might n...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
... other foreign country might be best or top notch in that particular field. For example, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to study abroad to boost their career.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, at least, for example, for instance, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05472636816 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56741967181 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517412935323 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0548065683 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.21951772744 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219911824026 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823736198009 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599602478335 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152002377034 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524209722448 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...lar county in near future. Further, some of the courses in their native country might n...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
... other foreign country might be best or top notch in that particular field. For example, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to study abroad to boost their career.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, at least, for example, for instance, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05472636816 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56741967181 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517412935323 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0548065683 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.21951772744 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219911824026 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823736198009 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599602478335 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152002377034 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524209722448 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.