Company management should conduct routine monitoring of all employee e mail correspondence Such monitoring will reduce the waste of resources such as time and system capacity as well as protect the company from lawsuits

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Company management should conduct routine monitoring of all employee e-mail correspondence. Such monitoring will reduce the waste of resources such as time and system capacity, as well as protect the company from lawsuits.

In corporate world many companies may it be Multinational companies or small-scale largely communicate for there affairs through electronic communication system. This help them to keep track of the activities and communication conducted between them. This activities are done by the employees of the company who has given their personalized developed by there respected company. But this all activities occur to much larger extent then it seems. To keep a track of it company develop specially dedicated departments like Regulatory Affairs and IT security department.They act as protective barriers to the company activities by keeping track and management of the activities. What if company do not have such departments. Are there any consequences. First example, Company X trying to export there innovative project that have promising success (large capital). Company person Mr Adam and his team is working from last 6 months on it . One day Mr Adam found out that there product is been marketed in same country under other name. And they found out that this is done by one of the employees of the company. This would not have happen if company had department like Regulatory Affairs and IT security department to keep track of employee e-mail correspondence. Second example, for Same Company X some has filed a complaint against illegal activities of which company is not involved but done under company name. To fine track of such person employed in the company in short span the maintain track record would have helped or in that case to curb that unlawful activity at very first place monitoring would have help. To sum up, for company to thrive for long with avoidance of any ill-legal conduct there should have a fram of security that would monitor all employee e-mail correspondence

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...d communication conducted between them. This activities are done by the employees of...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...tory Affairs and IT security department.They act as protective barriers to the compa...
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Line 1, column 932, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...team is working from last 6 months on it . One day Mr Adam found out that there pr...
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Line 1, column 1128, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...ees of the company. This would not have happen if company had department like Regulato...
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Line 1, column 1479, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...n employed in the company in short span the maintain track record would have helped or in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, then, in short, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13356164384 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88369851601 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8784278576 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9333333333 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257876953575 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849016255541 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607941962833 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257876953575 0.150359130593 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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