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As, technology increase dramatically laziness will also increase.the statement stated above is correct as per some situation.it is true when we consider the following cases.
People are becoming more dependent on technology.because,it gives us more comfort than previous.Basically we are using phone books to store the phone numbers of our near and dear.it not letting us to memorize the ten digit number.while coming to calculators it is preparing humans more lazy.but, it will be helpful in more complex cases.
More over coming to movies every one is watching online.No one is interested watching movies in theaters.they are missing the flavour of that movie and it will also become huge loss to movie makers.coming to social media, it is a good platform to spread positive and as well as negative information.people are addicted to these social medias and believing in them. it will carry us to the state which we cannot able to come out.while coming to children many of them attracted to the video games that will ruin the child.because, there will be no physical exercise to the by playing outdoor games.more complicatedly new born babies!.most of their parents are worse. they used to show the videos to them because of avoiding the babies cry.it will show more effect to babies' eyes.this type of actions are done because of parents work and not having time to spend with them.
Any way there are pros and cons by using technoloy.it will help us to minimize the issues and as well as maximize our laziness.these above statements should be avoided and there should be a proper usage of technology.we should use technology, not technology should.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, while, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 273.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24908424908 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14284860438 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.0359550562 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.991216753 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 238.833333333 118.986275619 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.5 23.4991977007 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.21951772744 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0348410148355 0.243740707755 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0173429280632 0.0831039109588 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0105584756767 0.0758088955206 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0171615721454 0.150359130593 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129273780204 0.0667264976115 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.0 14.1392134831 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 48.8420337079 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 12.1743820225 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.2143820225 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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