Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field.
The speaker makes a threshold claim that critical judgement of work in any field has negligible value until and unless it comes from someone who is expert in that field. I strongly concede with the speaker claim that without appropriate decision and suggestions, the productivity and sustainability of any projects can't be persisted out.
The first reason for my agreement with the speaker that the suggestions and appropriate generosity in any development projects require keen and pristine suggestions. This is possible to be obtained only from those expertise who are induced in that field. For instance, people who are involved in the development of electricity know the different technicalities involved in such developmental projects. On doing so, the endurance of various electrical projects can be built off which obviously sustained the path of real achievements within the nations. As a result, the life and daily activities of people will be highly benefited. Therefore, the real flavor of development is only touched if munificent suggestion are taken from those individuals who are highly engaged in such works.
The second reason why I agree with the speaker is that if serious argument when needed to be sorted during the course of innovation, the absolute and justifiable accord is needed. During such tenure, suggestions from lay person may be brutal. For instance, judiciary person when ask verdict regarding their court affairs from lay man then the necessity of courts who provide indubitable and indisputable service to the people will be finished forever. So, at that time, the role of judiciary person is highly recommended. Due to this, the contemporary society will get rid of fairs and crime from their society. Therefore, the right decision for tackling problems is only possible to be come from those person who know various ideas to solve that issue.
Some may argue that the strong decision making process doesn't only come from those person who are experts and pedants in that area. In some cases, the suggestions should be also taken from the people who live in communal area and optimum ideas to tackle the problems who they experienced from their generations. For instance, to solve the problems of society related to social issues, various suggestions have to be taken from the old aged person who are living in that area. As a result, justifiable and faithful decision can be build up in order to eradicate the problem from the society. This sort of activities definitely helps to boost the society towards the positive direction and ensure equity with the community. However, this point is flawed since only taking views and opinions from the old aged people doesn't provide good gesture to solve the minor issues from the societies. As a result, the minorities people who are living in that zone from the past will always lag behind. Hence, their future will be always be doomed and can't go forward. Therefore, affirmative suggestion should be taken both from the old aged people living within the society as well as from the expertise.
To sum up, achieving desired goals within the nation can be build off, if the nation show their attention to those people who are highly involved in such activities. On doing so, the perpetuity of every development can be sustained and the problems related to different social and nation issues can be extirpated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...im that without appropriate decision and suggestions, the productivity and sustai...
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Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...vity and sustainability of any projects cant be persisted out. The first reason fo...
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Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this expertise' or 'those expertises'?
Suggestion: this expertise; those expertises
...is is possible to be obtained only from those expertise who are induced in that field. For inst...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... the speaker is that if serious argument when needed to be sorted during the cour...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...ious argument when needed to be sorted during the course of innovation, the absolute and justifiabl...
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Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e to this, the contemporary society will get rid of fairs and crime from their so...
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Line 3, column 699, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
Suggestion: this person; those people; those persons
...oblems is only possible to be come from those person who know various ideas to solve that is...
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Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...us ideas to solve that issue. Some may argue that the strong decision making process...
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...that the strong decision making process doesnt only come from those person who are exp...
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Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
Suggestion: this person; those people; those persons
...on making process doesnt only come from those person who are experts and pedants in that are...
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Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...cess doesnt only come from those person who are experts and pedants in that area. In so...
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Line 4, column 814, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s and opinions from the old aged people doesnt provide good gesture to solve the minor...
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Line 4, column 945, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...minorities people who are living in that zone from the past will always lag behin...
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Line 4, column 1039, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...eir future will be always be doomed and cant go forward. Therefore, affirmative sugg...
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Line 4, column 1162, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...d aged people living within the society as well as from the expertise. To sum up, achievi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, sort of, as a result, as well as, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.3162921348 239% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2835.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 557.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08976660682 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71071847953 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447037701975 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 895.5 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7845397108 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.28 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194662175036 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652385134245 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110865603835 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137908207828 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126954730255 0.0667264976115 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.