Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field.
Do the critical judgement in any field have little value unless it comes to the person who is an expert in that field? I strongly concede with the speaker assertion. The reason behind on supporting the speaker claim is that making judgement without looking the appropriate concern of the people in that decision doesn't dissolve any verdict into the perfect solution, thereby critical view regarding the particular subject is the most for proper remedial output.
The first reason why I support the assertion is that different research activities perform on general level will reach towards their optimal solution if we carry out such workout with the view of experts in that area. Thus, proper suggestions and mentor from the expertise will lead to the accurate conclusion on any research frame work. For instance, any research personnel who are quite curious on resolving proper ideas regarding the social matters just like social status and belief, going on inside the society must concern the view of different researcher who are already active in that field. Thus, to lead to the accurate and precise result, different ideas and suggestion should be taken from the appropriate person so as to ensure the fastidious results.
The second reason behind my support to the assertion is that in judicial system, the laws made by the layperson is not considered accurate. Therefore, on deciding different critical decisions, the view from different judicious pedant should be undertaken so that the heady people will get perfect decision. Similarly, on doing so, numerous faults and errors seen in judiciary system will also be eradicated when such severe problems come inside the touch of such personnel. For instance, the victims from the Maoist Attack hadn't got the appropriate decision on their periphery till date because numerous forces are involved in order to conceal the real words. But, this case is also turned when the information regarding this incident reach under the premises of renowned judicial officer of Nepal called Bhakta Raj Sharma. Now, different hurdles faced by the people while getting judicious results is now solved as this case went under the hand of appropriate expertise who know how to handle such cases to provide justice to the poor and infected citizens.
Some believe that some decision should be taken dramatically without taking considerations from the experts. For instance, in 2019 A.D. the armed force of Indian had invaded some territory of Nepal called Kalapani. So, due to these incidents, various political upside down can be seen inside the country as thousands of students from various students union had involved on it so as to resolve this issue. Similarly,it is clear that this different students union hadn't take the special views and verdicts from the expert of foreign affairs. Due to the active intervention of students union, this issue is now motivated well enough so that the government of India have become serious to solve this issue from the meeting. However, this point is flawed since taking partial views and incomplete and inaccurate ideas doesn't solve severe issue in instantaneous period of time. Therefore, to solve such issue, the role of experts is prominent.
All in all if the above factors are contemplated we can easily reach a conclusion that taking numerous ideas and suggestions from the experts definitely helps to resolve various severe issue quite permanently rather than considering the surface views from laypersons.Such surface consideration will produce temporary and transient solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, regarding, second, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3006.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 572.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25524475524 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62005724848 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 215.323595506 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506993006993 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 936.0 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8423232244 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.142857143 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2380952381 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188356629671 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609709379878 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123172926506 0.0758088955206 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117693498162 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100332315673 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 100.480337079 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.