The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.
"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level."
In these meme, the business manager of a television station recommends to attract more viewer and advertiser to the program by improving various flaws seen in their television station. To bolster the recommendation, the manager cites the following facts: 1. During past years, more devotion of time to national news cause the excessive lose of viewers and thereby, urged to increase time to weather and local news as well so as to create more attraction. 2. Various attractive schemes should be managed so as to escalate the local business advertising contracts. Close scrutiny of each of these facts however reveals that none of them lend no credible evidence to bolster the recommendation.
Firstly, the argument readily assumes that the lose of viewers during past years is due to its more devotion to national news. If this is the case, then why its viewers on national scale isn't burgeoning at that time. Moreover, the station department didn't study about the choice of viewers towards the particular programs during the same tenure. Thus, the argument fails to mention the particular reasons regarding the decrease of its viewers.
Secondly, the argument could have been much clearer if the business manager mention the different technical aspects used in their station to bolster the station coverage. Blaming all their shortness on late news programs doesn't sound appropriate. Similarly, increasing time to weather and local news doesn't create vast improvements on its viewer number. So, different new programs which can allure viewers to the station's coverage should be designed. Hence, the argument lends no credible evidence to advocate the recommendation that is the case.
Finally, the argument fails to mention one of the key factors on the basis of which it could have been evaluated, only devoting time to local and weather news doesn't engender advertiser to increase advertising on their programs. Therefore, attractive scheme should be provided and managed to the advertisers so as to increase revenue. Likewise, various new facilities should be installed so that new contracts can be easily build off. Hence, the argument remains unsubstantiated and becomes open to debate.
To sum up, the argument relies on dubious assumption that renders unconvincing as it stands. To buttress the recommendation, the business manager must provide clear evidence perhaps by a local study or survey; different technical issues should be sorted out so as to increase its service on broader area, different shows should be launched to allure more viewers and various attractive schemes must be designed so that more advertisers get attracted to their television shows.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...us attractive schemes should be managed so as to escalate the local business advertising...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32387706856 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80646820211 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482269503546 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2915668225 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.15 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287321642824 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906716683811 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094892421419 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175659189027 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868507560318 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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