"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "
The topic present a controversial issue that the desire to maximize profits by corporations, it could create a conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. The is true that , corporations always have a focus on maximizing profits and a results it have impact on the general welfare of the nations. A perfect balance of increasing profits and also the general welfare of the nations need to maintain.
The two things are contrasting to a large extend, If we focus on increasing the profits then it surely deviate the corporations from the welfare of society and nations at large. Also every corporations always has a desire to see the graph of profits going upward. While doing this, they need to ensure that they also think of the welfare of the employees who work there and also the society where they are doing the business.
To maintain the balance, government impose certain norms on corporations. Corporations has to fulfill this norms which are made to maintain such general welfare. Failing to do so can affect the corporations at large. Many social activities and program are undertaken by corporations, so that contribute to the society and nations welfare. Apart from just providing employment, they have to conduct program such as women welfare program, blood donation camp, etc.
The corporations also need to opening training institute so that more people gets to learn new technology and would help to increase the skill level of the youth. Such training camp help the development of working group in the society.
Many corporations tries to just maximizing profits, as a results directly or indirectly they harm not only the nations welfare but also the environments. Many industries let the pollutant out in water and air without process it. This harm the environment and deteriorate the quality of nature we live in. Government many a times makes the law against such issue but fails to implement it. Therefore government also places a crucial role in maintaining the nations welfare affect by the corporations.
In Conclusion, although it is the primary goal of the corporations to maximize there profits, it is also important to work towards the nations welfare. Nations welfare not only help the society but also help the corporations to further progress and maximize there profits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
...of the nation at large. The is true that , corporations always have a focus on max...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
... have a focus on maximizing profits and a results it have impact on the general welfare o...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... on maximizing profits and a results it have impact on the general welfare of the na...
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Message: Did you mean 'deviates'?
Suggestion: deviates
...n increasing the profits then it surely deviate the corporations from the welfare of so...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...elfare of society and nations at large. Also every corporations always has a desire ...
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Suggestion: these
...rporations. Corporations has to fulfill this norms which are made to maintain such g...
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Suggestion: try
...up in the society. Many corporations tries to just maximizing profits, as a result...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...ns tries to just maximizing profits, as a results directly or indirectly they harm not on...
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...y of nature we live in. Government many a times makes the law against such issue but fa...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...t such issue but fails to implement it. Therefore government also places a crucial role i...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...role in maintaining the nations welfare affect by the corporations. In Conclusion, alt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09947643979 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83421778652 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46335078534 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4559407838 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311706729 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101328675187 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111587644894 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172141273084 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139216382773 0.0667264976115 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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