The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large
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There is no limit to desire in today's world. The people are greedy and always look for more than what they have, no matter how it is going to affect others. This greedy nature has lead to large scale consequences. Therefore the desire of the corporations to maximize profits creates conflicts with the general welfare of a nation .
Firstly , when a company or corporations is looking to maximize profits they look to hire people who are capable to work for them . Since the employees are directly linked to profits the companies end up firing many of them . As in today's world there are a lot of people who have exquisite talent but they are without a job . So companies look forward to hire freshers and in turn removing the older ones as the salary of a fresher would be very less than that of the employees currently working .
Due to this the company ends up with profit as they spend less on the freshers but it leads to large scale recession which leads to unemployment and disrupting the welfare of the nation . Due to the unemployment , it has direct effects on the nation's economy and GDP.
In an IT sector based company the company ends up hiring many freshers who have just graduated . This poses a threat on the jobs of the employees working currently as they definitely have a better payscale than that of a fresher but skills are just similar to them . Due to which the company sees this a possibility to earn profits by hiring the freshers and firing the older employees .
The corporations have the tendency to earn great profits . This desire generally leads to "do anything to get it" kind of attitude among the people . Due to this attitude many times the companies tend to commit fraud in order to earn excessive profits . Committing fraud is definitely harmful in regards to the welfare of the nation and hence it creates conflicts .
Concluding , that desire of corporations to maximize profits leads to create conflict with the general welfare of the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, look, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76811594203 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56020725387 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434782608696 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8449158319 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3888888889 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182091531769 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798179969429 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125607214111 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143767441126 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117732741421 0.0667264976115 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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