Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Many countries solve their ever-lasting problems just by discussion over their problems. The prompt conveys that during discussions with people having contrasting views will never change their mindset when they were questioned about their core beliefs and however, the statement does not hold true for all people. I will agree to the prompt and "I will not waste my energy on discussions with those with contrasting views after realizing that their points are invalid or irrelevant or misleading" and I will explain them in the following two paragraphs
Firstly, few people are narrow-minded and not patient enough to at least listen to other's points of view. This is because they are submerged into their own core beliefs and they are not ready to change their minds even though their beliefs are incorrect and it does not make any sense. For instance, I have a friend and he is against equality between men and women and he strongly believes women are meant for childbearing and to cook for him and till now his belief is unchanged because of his adamant mind-set. One possible reason for their behavior is the environment they are born and brought up and they might get this belief because of their upbringing
or they were thought of this idea by their parents or friends.
Secondly, there are a few sets of people who will realize that they were wrong in their ideology and beliefs but they strongly assume that is a matter of their pride if they change their mind during the discussions involving controversial topics. For example, a group of friends starts talking about a controversial subject and two people realized that their point of view is entirely wrong and misleading and one of the people among these two realized his mistake and corrected himself and the remaining person felt ashamed and started distracting the conversation just to make sure that others should not recognize that his beliefs were wrong. Due to the factors of sense of pride and self-satisfaction of not loosing in front of other people are not ready to change their beliefs.
So finally, It can be inferred from the above paragraphs, that it is unlikely to expect healthy discussions among people who are not open to conversations involving contrasting views and many people does not change their mind even though their beliefs are incorrect and it is not true for of everyone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...is belief because of their upbringing or they were thought of this idea by their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, for instance, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9875 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66124853217 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4875 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3136755979 60.3974514979 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.5 118.986275619 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 23.4991977007 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.21951772744 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33677048275 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156510469865 0.0831039109588 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784736542999 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191822276086 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945087574163 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 14.1392134831 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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