Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Science and technology play a salient role in the daily activities of humans. We are addicted to a few of the technologies available in the market and we try to find solutions to our problems using science and technology. Here the prompt states, all of society's problems will be solved using science and technology in the future. Science and technology will solve most of the problems but it is unlikely that it will solve all the problems of society. I will explain this in detail using the next two paragraphs.
Firstly, There are a couple of things that science and technology cannot fix it. For example, It cannot control the emotional feelings and sentiments of people. Such as people praying to God is a strong belief and science is continuously disproving the concept of God but it failed to change the emotions of people towards the people. In this way, it failed to change the feelings of people and it is not in the control of science and technology and it will fail to solve problems associated with society's emotions, feelings, and beliefs.
Secondly, The solutions given by science and technology will have side effects and leads to a different problem and this is considered as a never-ending process. For example, existing medicines in the market come with side effects. Even though it solves the current problem but leads us to get into a different problem. That is, tablets for fever might cause headache or vomiting sensations. According to Einstien's third law of motion, for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. So if we consider, Solutions given by science and technology as action then the effects of the solutions as the opposite reaction. It is possible that this reaction is an adverse effect and causes more problems.
From the above passages, it can be inferred that science and technology fail to solve all the problems of society's and it may lead to additional problems. It is not an answer to all the problems and society should come together to find solutions and should not depend on science and technology only.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89235127479 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68514896385 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450424929178 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.735104829 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9444444444 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336433056756 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11605318321 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117856295103 0.0758088955206 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230822617801 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107227547096 0.0667264976115 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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