You have a problem with the neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your Letter:Describe the problemSay how long it has been a problemExplain what action you want the neighbour to take.

Essay topics:

You have a problem with the neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your Letter:

Describe the problem

Say how long it has been a problem

Explain what action you want the neighbour to take.

Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to complain about the late night noises coming from your home. I live in house number 271 which is next to yours. I have been facing this problem for about one month.

Sometimes the volume of your television is too high, while at other times the noise of late night parties is creating trouble for me. I am a student and a part-time worker. Actually, I have to study late into the night because my exams are coming up next month. I wouldn’t have bothered to write if I didn’t have exams coming up.

I am in no way trying to interfere in your personal affairs, but I would really appreciate it if you could reduce the volume of your TV at night and it would be great if you could also postpone any parties you are planning to organize this month or next month.

I hope you will understand my situation.

Thank you for your consideration

Yours sincerely,

XYZ

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ouse number 271 which is next to yours. I have been facing this problem for about...
^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...organize this month or next month. I hope you will understand my situation. ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6265060241 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47985057543 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.1934332031 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186117303312 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722466333188 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588725837515 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113989539939 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420550025163 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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