Academic staff percentages in faculties by gender 2012

Essay topics:

Academic staff percentages in faculties by gender 2012

The above bar graph illustrates the distribution of percentage of male and female staff vs the academic subjects in the year. The academics are divided into 7 different subjects – Arts, Business, education, engineering, law, medicine and, science. X-axis is evenly divided into 20 percentage scaling system.

In medicine, we can see that the percentage of male and female faculties were almost equal, comprising 52% female and 50% male staffs. Engineering has highest percentage (82) of male faculty and least percentage (18) of female faculty. Education has highest percentage (78) of female faculty. Male faculty dominance can be seen in business, engineering, law and science. Female faculty dominance can be seen in arts, education and, in medicine. It is not surprising to see only one gender is occupying 100% of the occupancy in any academic fields and it shows that the education committee provided equal opportunities for both the genders.

The above graph explains the availability of staff per various academic field of study and spreads light on the uneven distribution of faculty in engineering and even distribution of staff in medicine department.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: has the highest
...female and 50% male staffs. Engineering has highest percentage 82 of male faculty and least...
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...entage 18 of female faculty. Education has highest percentage 78 of female faculty. Male f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4043715847 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98628755224 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535519125683 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5752847787 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 5.23603664747 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312642970275 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119890647541 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588156271837 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201531831676 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00944806201952 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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