Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
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The prompt suggests that the one who see overcome doubts or criticism of others will create their own leagacy. The one who is open to positive criticism and fix all doubts will create their own history. That is the one who is not open to criticism and acts arrogant will not be successful in the following two paragraphs.
Firstly, a person who is focused towards achieving his or her goals will not consider doubts or criticism of others as a threat to their goal. For example, we a tremendous amount of scientists achieved what they itended to achieve. One such scientist is Thomas Alva Edison, famously know as, inventor of electric bulbs. During his time many believed that he was crazy and wasting his time by doing some irrelevant expeirments and they used to make fun of him. However, Edison did not loose his concentration and he was succssfully invented the elecrtic bulbs and shut the mouths of people, who were talking ill against him. Likewise, if a person who doesnot loose his or her belief towards their idea will stand successful and will create there own legacy.
Secondly, consequences of quitting on their ideas are explained in this paragraph. I will give an example from my past experince. I was added to a new project and all the team members were asked to come up with their own brain-storming ideas for this project and I presented my idea to the team leader and he was brutally criticized my idea and later I doubted my thought process and stopped devoloping the idea. However, team leader presented the same idea that I had shared with him to his bosses and got approval for the project. We can understand that if we loose hope of our ideas due to some exteranl factors such as crticism or doubts of others. It will severly impact us and we are the one who looses everything and might cause leads to adverse effects on our health and the relationship with them.
Overall, It is recomended not to loose focus towards their goal for external factors such as doubts and criticism of others and this will help to create their own legacy and shut the mouths of who were spreading ill against them. Finally who overcome all the doubts or criticism will stand tall and shine like a star in the sky.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 485, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ake fun of him. However, Edison did not loose his concentration and he was succssfull...
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Line 7, column 659, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... him. Likewise, if a person who doesnot loose his or her belief towards their idea wi...
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Line 7, column 740, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...a will stand successful and will create there own legacy. Secondly, consequences of ...
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Line 15, column 34, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
.... Overall, It is recomended not to loose focus towards their goal for external f...
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Line 15, column 231, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...of who were spreading ill against them. Finally who overcome all the doubts or criticis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65281173594 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48714991875 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488997555012 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2367708396 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.941176471 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0588235294 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202908813601 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756476656976 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522271235857 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116206483335 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686697081512 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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