It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?
Physical education and sports are widely accepted by many of the schools and colleges as part of their curriculum activities. Prompt also accepts the same and expects all children and teenagers should get physical education and sports classes while they were growing up. These classes can be a strong impact in shaping ones carrier in the field of sports and also helps an individual to be mentally and physically fit. I strongly agree that all students should get these educations and I will explain them in the next two paragraphs.
Firstly, the physical education and sports will boost the growth of a child and a teenager as an athlete. It helps them to concentrate on education and also allow them to discover themselves as an emerging sportsperson and they can have a new carrier in sports. One such example of shaping carrier in sports during school sports is Rahul Dravid. An Indian cricketer, famously called “The Wall” of Indian cricket team. He shaped his carrier when he was in National School. In this way, physical education and sports not only helps to build fitness but also encourages an individual to become an athlete. There are examples of people winning in prestigious Olympic games and world championship are active in sports from their school time itself.
Secondly, scheduled classes for physical education and sport should not be misused by school management to swap with any curriculum classes. Somehow few parents and teachers ignores the importance of physical education and sports and force students to concentrate on studies itself. It will cause an adverse impact on the students life. Here, I would like to mention one of my friend who was forced to study in his childhood by skipping sports and till date he don’t to how to throw the tennis ball and for this reason people make fun of him. In this way, people who missed sports and physical education during their teenage end up regretting not playing any games and in some cases they are socially awkward and unfit in many of the physical activities.
In conclusion, sports and physical education are essential for all students and teenagers and we as a society should not restrict them to studies but also encourages them to be a part of sports and it should become mandatory for all students to get sports education in schools and colleges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, as for, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 10.4138276553 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9746835443 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60017871275 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473417721519 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7153856779 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.588235294 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288801477862 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101468492898 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899023146365 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224676737348 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103238459064 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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