You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
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Internet shopping has revolutionized our shopping experience. Majority of the people prefer online shopping over traditional shopping method. It is handy and convenient mode of shopping compared to any other forms of shopping and I will explain the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping and why its disadvantages are out shadowed by its advantages.
The online shopping attracts customer with discounts and cashback offers. Due to these eye candy offers people usually choose online shopping over legacy shopping mode- where one should visit a shop to purchase items like books, train tickets, groceries, and so on. It allows users to buy things over the internet and it does not require customer to visit to the stores and deliver the items to customers preferred location in the name of home delivery. In my experience, I personally hate visiting shops to buy items and prefer online shopping because I feel it is more convenient and I don’t need to stand in billing queue to pay my bills.
Even though online shopping is advantageous but it also has some disadvantages. The items purchased from online shopping may not have instant delivery option and if we were in the need of a specific item, we may not get the item immediately. Sometimes the items ordered from online is different than the orders receive and we should unnecessarily go through replacement or refund process for the delivered item. We cannot test the authenticity of the products in online shopping and we should rely only the specific description given on the shopping portal. I suggest to buy egg and vegetables from nearby grocery store over online shopping because the quality of delivery is compromised in case of vegetables and eggs, in my case, the delivered eggs were already broken and they are not in edible conditions. Fraud cases are common in online shopping in terms of goods and payment options.
In conclusion, the disadvantages of the online shopping is shadowed by its advantages. It is because online shopping is so handy and it can be done anywhere at any time irrespective of the age group.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
... items ordered from online is different than the orders receive and we should unnece...
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Line 7, column 561, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest buying'.
Suggestion: suggest buying
...ription given on the shopping portal. I suggest to buy egg and vegetables from nearby grocery ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06017191977 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85412997499 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521489971347 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0866031065 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.733333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127835335285 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561825682027 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305681095689 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897871349743 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342910699561 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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