The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You should write at lea

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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You should write at least 150 words.

The above diagram illustrates the working model of a wave energy machine and it's location options. The first diagram explains the generation of electricity by rotation of the turbine. The second diagram illustrates the amount of electricity can be generated by setting up in two different locations.

A Wave energy machine consists, two chambers, an electricity generator , and a turbine. The two turbines are divided into upper chamber and lower chamber. The amount of water and its wave flew inside lower chambers exerts pressure and causes air to pass in and out of the upper chamber from the lower chamber. The upper chamber has a turbine attached to the electricity generator and the amount of air passing inside the upper chamber results in the generation of electricity and it is stored inside the electricity generator.

The locations setup of wave energy machines plays a major role in the output of electricity. If a machine is set up near the water bed and its installation cost is cheaper compared to the machines which are planted where the water current is more. Likewise, the output is more where water wave movements are more and vice-versa.

In this way, we can understand the working model of wave machine based on its geo locations.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...electricity by rotation of the turbine. The second diagram illustrates the amount o...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., two chambers, an electricity generator , and a turbine. The two turbines are div...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e upper chamber from the lower chamber. The upper chamber has a turbine attached to...
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Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tored inside the electricity generator. The locations setup of wave energy machi...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nside the electricity generator. The locations setup of wave energy machines...
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Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'locations'' or 'location's'?
Suggestion: locations'; location's
...e the electricity generator. The locations setup of wave energy machines plays a m...
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Line 9, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wave movements are more and vice-versa. In this way, we can understand the worki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, second

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04285714286 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74995073782 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471428571429 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5277741041 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2727272727 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118302584166 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584981772032 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440612787296 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861837282934 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296067901458 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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