Essay topics:
Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Education
...ence and not to tell them what to think.Education builds critical and rational thinking w...
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...h enhances their decision-making skills.These skills helps them to think what is righ...
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...eir decision-making skills.These skills helps them to think what is right and wrong f...
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... think what is right and wrong for them.Hence,educational institutions should not dis...
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...k what is right and wrong for them.Hence,educational institutions should not dissuade any fi...
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Suggestion: Children
...ld a strong foundation for the students.Children should be taught how they should be tot...
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... be totally determined towards the goal.They should be taught how to handle a situat...
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...aught how to handle a situation fiercely .Also to make the best of situation and t...
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...ght how to handle a situation fiercely .Also to make the best of situation and that ...
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...ght how to handle a situation fiercely .Also to make the best of situation and that ...
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Suggestion: They
...hat any bad situation is an opportunity.They should never teach a child what to thin...
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Suggestion: , instead
...should never teach a child what to think,instead how to think should be the motive.There...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...stead how to think should be the motive.Therefore,The motive of an educational institutio...
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... to think should be the motive.Therefore,The motive of an educational institution is...
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Suggestion: , rather
...ach children how to tackle the situation,rather than running from them. Each child ha...
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Suggestion: Some
...child has its own interests and choices.Some students may like arts and some people ...
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...e arts and some people may like science.In order to let them seek their interests,...
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...n order to let them seek their interests,they should be explored to every field possi...
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...uld be explored to every field possible.This will provide them a platform to determi...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...etermine their strengths and weaknesses.Moreover,knowledge is interrelated,if one finds ...
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Suggestion: , knowledge
... their strengths and weaknesses.Moreover,knowledge is interrelated,if one finds technology...
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...esses.Moreover,knowledge is interrelated,if one finds technology more interesting b...
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...e interesting but have also studied arts,he can combine both the knowledge to produ...
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...e knowledge to produce something better.This enhances their creativity and thinking ...
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...s their creativity and thinking ability.Hence,each one should get exposure to various...
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...ir creativity and thinking ability.Hence,each one should get exposure to various diff...
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...et exposure to various different fields.In my opinion,if a child has determination...
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...o various different fields.In my opinion,if a child has determination,perseverance ...
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... my opinion,if a child has determination,perseverance and interest in that field which are th...
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...field which are the pillars of education,he achieve everything with hard work. Mo...
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...d which are the pillars of education,he achieve everything with hard work. Moreover,t...
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...ve everything with hard work. Moreover,the educational institution can dissuade st...
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... of study in which there is a high risk.For instance,if a child wants to pursue art...
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... which there is a high risk.For instance,if a child wants to pursue art which invol...
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...ch involves dark fiction or black magic.It may affect the child in its behaviour.I...
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...t may affect the child in its behaviour.It can also lead to something unhealthy an...
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... unhealthy and may cause harm to others.This can influence his mind and can make him...
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Suggestion: Hence
... can make him commit an offensive crime.Hence,it institutes should take care of the f...
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...make him commit an offensive crime.Hence,it institutes should take care of the fiel...
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...ds students wants to pursue. Therefore,An educational institution should help the...
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...itically and impart good values on them.In this way, they will provide students a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64247311828 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84109120878 2.79657885939 137% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545698924731 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 23.0359550562 269% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.186552817 60.3974514979 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 349.833333333 118.986275619 294% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.0 23.4991977007 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 5.21951772744 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 7.80617977528 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18124101153 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092222525974 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469083000461 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104366919665 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363520110493 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.1 14.1392134831 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 48.8420337079 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 12.1743820225 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.32 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.8 11.2143820225 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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