Education, one of the fundamental right of human. Everyone have right to get education And almost every country try to provide educational facilities to its citizen according to their ability through different educational institutes. Sometimes this educational institutes try to decide the fate of students and dissuaded them them pursuing their field of interest and provide them some contemporary apparently seeming successful field. This is ridiculous to dissuaded students from pursuing a field which is seems interesting and perfect for them.
The modern age is considered as the age of Information Technology, there is a huge opportunity in IT sector and perhaps a lots of scope if one student pursue a degree in IT sector and perhaps get a job easily. This doesn't mean that this student succeed in life. And for this reason educational institutions suggesting its students to do IT courses and dissuaded them from other fields of study. Success doesn't mean to get a job only. It's a wrong and misguided theme of the society. If a student does not like to study or work with IT or computer related activities he will not be a good professional of this field. In contrast, if some one has interest and feel better about thinking and doing IT related activity then IT job is suitable for him. And IT related education make him more efficacious about it. So student should pursue their field of study according to their interest and educational institute should not dissuaded them from their field of interest.
This is the era of modernization and digitalization. Everything is turn into automated or digital from analogue. In a word this is the age of science. This doesn't mean we put all our students on science study and dissuaded them from pursue other field of study. If we do some years later will discover all the people of our society are either doctor or engineer and there is no any poet, writer, sociologist, psychologist etc. This will be very naive to educate all the students towards the successful field and dissuaded them from other fields which is apparently seem to be unsuccessful.
Society needs every kind of professionals, so educational institutes need to create every kind of professionals by encouraging students to study in different field field of Education rather than encourage them to study in particular field or dissuaded them from a field which apparently seem to be unsuccessful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: them
...cide the fate of students and dissuaded them them pursuing their field of interest and pr...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ge opportunity in IT sector and perhaps a lots of scope if one student pursue a degree...
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Suggestion:
...pursue a degree in IT sector and perhaps get a job easily. This doesnt mean that ...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...tor and perhaps get a job easily. This doesnt mean that this student succeed in life....
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Suggestion: doesn't
...hem from other fields of study. Success doesnt mean to get a job only. Its a wrong and...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... Success doesnt mean to get a job only. Its a wrong and misguided theme of the soci...
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Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...essional of this field. In contrast, if some one has interest and feel better about thin...
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Message: Did you mean 'jobs'?
Suggestion: jobs
...g and doing IT related activity then IT job is suitable for him. And IT related edu...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'dissuade'
Suggestion: dissuade
...st and educational institute should not dissuaded them from their field of interest. T...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...a word this is the age of science. This doesnt mean we put all our students on science...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... either doctor or engineer and there is no any poet, writer, sociologist, psycholo...
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Line 5, column 566, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...m from other fields which is apparently seem to be unsuccessful. Society needs ev...
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Suggestion: field
...ouraging students to study in different field field of Education rather than encourage them...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, so, then, in contrast, in particular, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03482587065 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93206244366 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450248756219 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1736432958 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385369827861 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115178237572 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113194564438 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269413905667 0.150359130593 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031904512491 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.