Communication is one of the most important skill for human. If a person can communicate with new people and make them familiar within short time the person can match in new environment within very short time. Making new is always appreciable. some people believe that is important to keep old friend rather than making new friends. But evidence shows that making new friend is more important than to keep old friend. This eassy will discuss why it is important to make new friends than to keep old friends.
To begin with, in this modern world it is very hard to find a person who is born, grow and died in same place and never went outside world. If a person want to aquire education he/she has to migrate from one place to another for the sake of good education because one can not find all the good educational institute in the same place. So people have to migrate one place to another. As a result new environment means new people. So if you has to lead a normal life in new place you have to make friends because a normal human can not live alone. For instance if a person migrate USA from Bangladesh for higher education he/she has to left the country and family and friends as well. And in the new environment if he will need to meet new people so he/she has to make new friends. So it is important to make new friend than to keep old friends.
However, in the entire life one person has to meet new people and new envirnment, thus it provide an opportunity to make new friends and learn different thing from them and its help to broaden our knowledge. By meeting new people can learn about new culture and new cutoms. For examples, in universities all the students do not come from the same area. Some come from different cities even different country and by introducing or meeting one can learn about the culture and customes of the particular area or country.
This essay discussed how making new friends can make our life easy and give opportunity to learn about new things. And this is why I think making new friends is more important than to keep old friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mmunication is one of the most important skill for human. If a person can communi...
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...ommunicate with new people and make them familiar within short time the person ca...
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Suggestion: Some
...time. Making new is always appreciable. some people believe that is important to kee...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e have to migrate one place to another. As a result new environment means new peop...
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Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...environment means new people. So if you has to lead a normal life in new place you ...
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Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
... new people and new envirnment, thus it provide an opportunity to make new friends and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in short, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51187335092 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36524367663 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406332453826 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7726647781 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.95 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345007527019 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153036215454 0.076458572812 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138343193804 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252780145192 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968406730914 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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