Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
Change is what is constant. As years passes by, that is how opportunities comes and go. This prompt states that academic institutions should encourage students to choose disciplines that will equip them for lucrative jobs. However, I mostly disagree with this suggestion for two reasons which I will elucidate below, but I do concede that choosing course of study that will be help in successful careers will sure be a breakthrough for students.
To begin with, academic institutions should discourage students from going for courses that will equip them for a prosperous career because this can limit the student achievement in life. For example, students who studied business studies and focused in typewritting are facing hard times in this present-day society because the field of study has become antiquated and archaic as computer has taken over the world. This example above shows that it is deleterious for students to focus on courses that will prepare for a successful career because things do change.
Furthermore, students should detest going into field of study with the mindset of becoming wealthy and breaking through because expectations sometimes disappoint. For examples, students who went into politics because of it fame and wealth, have one way or the other regretted particularly in Nigeria where insecurity has become the other of the day. Politics has lead to bloodshed and chaos as many of the politicians and their families are u safe. This shows that what that "glitters are not gold" so students needs to be scrupulous when choosing field of study.
On the contrary, students going for courses that is lucrative will sure open doors of finances for them because they will be on demand often. For instance, students who went for Agricultural Engineering while at the institution are on a very high demand in today's society because food is imperative and the principal thing humans need to survive. Students in this field can never get penniless because they are seen as important factors that human cannot do without.
In conclusion, while enrolling for lucrative disciplines that will sure open doors of breakthrough, it is however important for students to choose courses that will not become outworn in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...ts needs to be scrupulous when choosing field of study. On the contrary, students ...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...courses that is lucrative will sure open doors of finances for them because they ...
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Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...se courses that will not become outworn in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 363.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23415977961 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7832063765 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8747010929 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42600019519 0.243740707755 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146068628249 0.0831039109588 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106021189477 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252884489254 0.150359130593 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689857357758 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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