Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Over the years, the way and lives of people have been governed by laws which enable them act well, think we'll, and become responsible in a particular society. This laws states that laws should be pliable enough to take responsibility of various circumstances, times, and place. I mostly agree with this recommendation for two reasons which I will elucidate below, but I do concede that the policy is without it own flaws particularly in placing restrictions on how things should be handled.
To begin with, laws should be flexible enough to allow for freedom of expression and actions because this will enable individuals build self confidence and attain whatever he or she desires. For instance, a Yoruba man who is head heel in love with an Igbo lady will not be scared of being castigated or reprimand since laws governing him are flexible. He would be able to marry a lady of his own choice thereby, deriving happiness and everlasting peace of mind. In addition, a Christian will have the freedom to worship where he or she likes to since the laws are not rigid enough that might make the individual worship where is not appealing. If there is a flexibility in laws, this might light to unhappiness and lack of cooperation of a society since their expectations are cut short.
Furthermore, flexibility in laws promotes inter-cultural relationship and create an atmosphere of serenity because different cultures will have the freedom to come together and work hand in hand for mutual benefits. For instance, an Igbo man will not be afraid of being kidnapped or his business established in the northern part being to establish his business in the northern part being demolished thereby bringing him back to square one. Moreover, employing workers in the northern part where he has large businesses will surely provide employments for the fulani's as he will be able to employ them as sales person's.
On the contrary, laws that are not flexible will help reduce crimes. For instance, a society who places life imprisonment for people who steals will make it's members well behaved and not want to be a victim of circumstance. In addition, people will be well behaved and this will create a good name for the society because "a good name is better than silver or gold".
In conclusion, there is need for freedom in everything one does in life as this will make people become better, more sensible, exposed, and have the ability to make decision for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93540669856 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78777944724 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511961722488 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1758289399 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.533333333 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8666666667 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22583715712 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945250691896 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103476839442 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126071987832 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886602396198 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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