The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Over the years, societies have followed a particular culture, norms, and tradition that govern them that if misrepresented outside to the public, can forever tarnish the society beliefs. This prompt states that the most essential way to fathom modern culture is by elucidating the trends of its youth. I mostly agree with this suggestion for two reasons which I will elucidate below, but I do concede that the policy is without its own flaw particularly in failing to understand that some youth might have decided to be a “a black sheep” of the culture which have been laid down for them to practice and follow.
To begin with, the action of a youth, tells a lot about where he or she is coming from because it is believed that he or she follows a particular norm that governs and influences the behavior of its members. For instance, a lady who appears irresponsible in dressing like wearing skimpy dress to church or a guy who places earring in his ear with his body covered with tattoo is a enough reason to analyze where they are coming from and the culture being practiced.
Furthermore, the way of life and success of a youth speaks a whole lot about where he or she is coming from and the desire of members of its society to success. For example, in Nigeria, where the Igbo culture belongs to one of the ethnic group in the country, Igbo youths are recognized to be industrious. As early as 5am, they have started shedding their businesses and work from Mondays to Sundays. They are seen all over the country establishing big plazas and businesses such as electronic, building materials, motor parts etc. Looking at the efforts in which the youths make, one can tell that they have been groomed by their culture never to be lazy and always be independent.
Admittedly, it might be difficult sometimes to understand the modern culture of a particular society through the trends of its youth because the youth might be indecorous and a black sheep of the society who have decided to give his or her society a bad name through daily actions carried out. For instance, a youth who travelled abroad and was caught dealing with drugs and finally deported back to his home town with his case currently considered as “Mental case” due to the hard drugs he took and the emotional trauma he is currently facing, might begin to chase after young girls in his kindred and beyond and even go to the extent of rapping them which is a big slap and stigma to the culture of the society where he hails from. This example above shows that it might be wrong sometimes to judge a culture based on just the picture its present to the public.
In conclusion, understanding a particular culture works well with the trends of the youth because they represent an integral part of the society and are believed to be the best representative of their culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 521, Rule ID: DT_DT[3]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'a' or '“a' is left.
Suggestion: a; “a
...hat some youth might have decided to be a “a black sheep” of the culture which have ...
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ar with his body covered with tattoo is a enough reason to analyze where they are...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...of life and success of a youth speaks a whole lot about where he or she is coming from an...
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Line 4, column 776, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'wrong'.
Suggestion: sometimes wrong
...is example above shows that it might be wrong sometimes to judge a culture based on just the pi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2352.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 503.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.675944334 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55753488892 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495029821074 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5013237633 60.3974514979 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.0 118.986275619 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.9285714286 23.4991977007 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186274011528 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700890154569 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556868023109 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114146507548 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418681368558 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 48.8420337079 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.