Educators should teach facts only after their students have studied the ideas, trends, and concepts that help explain those facts.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Education is one of the basic rights people of a nation should have. Government builds educational institutes to ensure that people
get proper education. The premise suggests that students should be taught the facts by educators only after they have studied the
ideas which will help explain those facts prior to the lectures. I strongly agree with the statement for three particular reasons.
First of all, if the students are required to have a prior knowledge of the concept to be taught, they will be bound to do some
research accordingly. This regular research practice will help them broaden their knowledge area and perhaps increase their research
interest. Increased research interest may lead to various groundbreaking inventions in the long run. Thomas Edison can be mentioned
to be an exemplar character in this respect. He used to possess a profound penchant for research from his early childhood. This
strong inclination to finding out the mystery of science and inventions has lead to a noteworthy number of patents for him. So,
having a prior knowledge should be a requirement to achieve better result in future.
Secondly, it will be beneficial to both the parties, educators and students to utilize their lecture time to the fullest if students
already have a basic knowledge on the concept. Besides the utilization of time, as students will have a primary idea on the topic,
entire lecture will require less time than usual which will make the lecture less tiring and help students hold full concentration.
Studies from a recent survey have shown that, institutions which require students to have prior ideas before the lecture class tend
to show greater success than the institutions having no such requisite. So, in order to gaining more success.
Additionally, when a student does some studies on his own to have some prior ideas, the practice helps him to grow a better
understanding to the topic which will increase his interest in that field. Research has proved that students are capable of cutting
good marks when they tend to possess more interest the particular subject topic.
Some may argue that, if prior knowledge is made compulsory, weak students may not be able to study on their own to build a primary
concept and lag behind. However, if a weak student tries to find the ideas and concepts, they may lag behind at the beginning, but
this process of searching for knowledge will help him improve his limitations resulting in better outcomes. So, i wholeheartedly
agree with the statement.
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...stitutions having no such requisite. So, in order to gaining more success. A...
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...ved that students are capable of cutting good marks when they tend to possess mor...
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...in better outcomes. So, i wholeheartedly agree with the statement.
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...er outcomes. So, i wholeheartedly agree with the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31339712919 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69445226892 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511961722488 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0786320431 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.05 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.97078651685 422% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 7.80617977528 448% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213958209099 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677187108384 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757234552137 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711212590252 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591948701983 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.