The effectiveness of a country s leaders is best measured by examining the well being of that country s citizens Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be s

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The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

For the effectiveness of something to be quantifiable, a physical entity is required. Similarly, for defining the effectiveness of a country's leaders can be measured by scrutinizing the well-being of its citizens in various aspects.

In the contemporary world, the rulers of a country analogous to the Prime, Minister, the President are the leaders for a country. A country's well-being can be measured by the decisions taken by these leaders to lead the country's citizens. It is not that every prime minister in the post takes impressive decisions. So, a leaders ability to make decisions is crucial in measuring a country's effectiveness. Citizens live their life basing on these decisions. If awful decisions are taken, then the people of the country would be leading awful lives.

Furthermore, a leader should take responsibility for the actions of the country. During a pandemic, a leader should make decisions for the welfare of his people and make appropriate decisions. An irresponsible leade would be apathetic to his people. So, if decisions are taken for and by the people, a country's citizens would be living prosperous lives. On the contrary, if a leader is irresponsible and apathetic, he could be held responsible for terrible consequences. Although, if the leader is responsible, it is the responsibility of the citizens to carry out the leader's decision promptly. For example, NRC bill was issued by the BJP government, this decision was made due to various factors affecting the country and by implementing it, Modi proved to be responsible for solving India's tribulations. But, the Indians criticised him and revolted against the bill. In this situation, the citizens suffered a lot.

Sometimes, the leader's trials to make the country a better place may be futile or successful i.e. sometimes, even after putting efforts a country's citizens may not be well. For instance, Rani Laxmi Bhai, queen of Jhansi died fighting against the Britishers. For what, the death of her people? Although, she inspired even the women to join the war.

To elucidate, a country's well being can or cannot be measured by a leaders efforts.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
... post takes impressive decisions. So, a leaders ability to take decisions is crucial in...
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Line 8, column 294, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ers. For what, the death of her people? Although, she inspired even the women to join th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, similarly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1884057971 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12567539435 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498550724638 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5220990648 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3636363636 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6818181818 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298212556694 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989871834322 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092336144379 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217596856402 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538412451787 0.0667264976115 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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