Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoni

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Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Democratic countries elect their leader and grant the Prime Minister full-fledged powers for ruling the country. It implies that the citizens of a country are willing to accept the decisions taken by the Prime Minister for the country as a whole. So, I agree with the statement that government officials rely on their own judgement rather than considering peoples' opinion.

Normally in democratic countries, it is the people who elect a leader to rule their country. Once he is in power, he appoints responsible officials to carry out tasks in the various province. As in most of the countries people choose their leaders, the government officials should rely on their own judgements. Because people of their own free will have chosen that particular person for making decisions for the country on behalf of themselves. On the contrary, there are a few countries where communalism and even monarchy prevail and officials in such countries take into account peoples' judgement before coming to a conclusion on some decisions. One such country is Algeria, where a monarchial form of government prevails and there are few accounts in history where the King has chosen to rely on peoples' judgements rather than on his own.

Moreover, for countries such as India, China and America it is a herculean task to consult the view of each and every citizen. Financially also it would be a burden for under developing countries such as India. It would be easier for leaders to depend upon their own judgement against the will of the people. Additionally, with such a gargantuan number of people, there would be chaos when a choice is given to the public.

Similar to India, the will of the people can be carried out within smaller communities. Like in India, where third level governments exist for Districts and Mandals exists decisions can be taken by considering the diverse opinion of each individual. Because, a Sarpanch rules his respective district and districts are less in area, the views of each and every person can be considered and implemented.

To elucidate, government officials serving a small group of people can take into account the different views of people and serve them.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, third, such as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 2260.96107784 81% => OK
No of words: 362.0 441.139720559 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05801104972 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74562984714 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 204.123752495 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486187845304 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 705.55239521 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4373348717 57.8364921388 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.705882353 119.503703932 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 5.70786347227 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20106637564 0.218282227539 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798122225631 0.0743258471296 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846819459608 0.0701772020484 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119230499639 0.128457276422 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637220953596 0.0628817314937 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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