Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A lot of things are require for the successful leadership of a government official. While it is necessary for public officials to rely on their judgment when combating quandaries, it is also pertinent for these officials to abdicate to the will of the people whom they serve. However, extraneous submission and reliance on one’s judgment is detrimental. Hence, public leaders should exhibit these qualities moderately in order to avoid bad governance.
To begin with, a government official depending on his judgment while facing enigmas limns competency. It shows that the leader is capable of solving problems individually. Barrack Obama leading the Americans to victory against Osama Bin Laden without public opinions denotes Obama’s leadership dexterity. However, too much of this act is highly detrimental the official’s image as it makes the official to be seen as a despot. A public official, who wields excessive judgment, mostly passess rules that inconvenients the citizens. These officials, who refuses public opinions every time, turns out to become the enemy of the people he serves.
On the flip side, government officials abdicating to the will of the people leads to effective government. This is because these leaders, who takes into consideration the people’s grieve, channels their activities towards satisfying the people. Thus, increasing transparency, efficacy in government, accountability and trustworthy. However, too much submission makes the official more predictable and more credulous. The upshot of this is that these officials, who pays most attention to people’s gripe, unwittingly becomes vulnerable to the public and to the adversaries. Hence, the leader will be easily swayed into engaging in bad activities.
Notwithstanding, some well-learned individuals might cavil that it is necessary for leaders to rely on their own judgment as this reliance leads to fast action, prevents unnecessary and incompetent opinions. This is true to some extent. But we also need to put into consideration, the leader’s competency. It is grotesque to expect a regent with humanity background to independently take decisions in science-related quagmires. Also, it is ludicrous to expect a ruler with no knowledge in technology to single-handedly decided for tech savvies. Apart from this, we risk tyranny if a leader is left to make decisions alone.
In conclusion, it is necessary for a leader, who wants to serve his people diligently, to mildly succumb to the will of the people and also mildly depend on his judgment. Through this moderate actions, the leader will not only thwart becoming tyrant, but will also please the people sately. Hence, any leader who wishes to govern justly should consider the people’s queries while also depending on his intuitions in taking decisions.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
A lot of things are require for the successful leadership of a gove...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... officials abdicating to the will of the people leads to effective government. Th...
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Line 9, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the leader will not only thwart becoming tyrant, but will also please the people ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2393.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50114942529 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11252482837 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542528735632 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2522844072 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.72 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164453970297 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451615592612 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425108023594 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984845016157 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280300505764 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
A lot of things are require for the successful leadership of a gove...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... officials abdicating to the will of the people leads to effective government. Th...
^^
Line 9, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the leader will not only thwart becoming tyrant, but will also please the people ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2393.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50114942529 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11252482837 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542528735632 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2522844072 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.72 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164453970297 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451615592612 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425108023594 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984845016157 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280300505764 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.