Giving the complexity of defining well-being of a citizen, there are innumerous factors that should be taken into account for scaling the efficacy of a country’s leader. For instance, high employment rates, access to affordable health care, good educational system, security from invasion by enemies and reasonable inflation rates are few of the factors that directly or indirectly impact the welfare of the citizens. In that context, the view that the effectiveness of a country’s leader is best measured by examining the well-being of that country’s citizen is too extreme due to “all or nothing” impression it gives. Moreover, since the well-being of a human is subjective, I cannot completely agree with the claim.
To begin with, it is the leaders who propose all economic, political, cultural and social policies directly affecting the people’s life. How well their citizens live, therefore, is the direct result of these policies. The policies, in turn, reflect the effectiveness of the leaders’ working. For example, the current prime minister of India, Narendra Modi, brought up programs like cleanliness movement, infrastructure development, and vocational training programs and many others that have helped Indian citizens to prosper.
However, the effectiveness of a leader is not only limited to the development of people and providing them with the access to a good life but also to protect the historical monuments and to preserve the legacy and cultural traditions of our predecessors. Each country, in fact, each region in this world has evolved over a period of time and has developed its own set of beliefs and customs. It is the responsibility of the leader to take care of these characteristics to truly qualify as a good leader.
In addition to the above point, a leader should also take into account the care of biological diversity and wildlife. Extinction of several species will lead to an imbalance in the ecological system which will indirectly impact the lives of human beings. Similarly, measures should be taken to control the increasing pollution as it affects the ozone layer and ultimately leads to global warming, floods due to melting glaciers and acid rains and therefore, impacting people’s lives. Hence, focus on environmental concerns will also contribute in evaluating the leader’s performance.
In conclusion, one can appreciate the credo expressed in this instance, but surely one cannot rely on the potential error of following it to the extreme.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...region in this world has evolved over a period of time and has developed its own set of belief...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...luating the leader's performance. In conclusion, one can appreciate the cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16489003373 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5687627872 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.75 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 5.21951772744 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305439676062 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904135995063 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962196287801 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131510896074 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120930935663 0.0667264976115 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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