A coin has two sides, one containing merits and the other, demerits. Same is the criteria to our perspectives. One person see the glass half empty the other view the same as half full. Technology has and will evolve over a period of time and there will be be thins in future which one has not even dreamt of. There was a period when sending and receiving letters is the only means of communication and today, e-mails can be send or received in a blink of eye. The point that technology has made our lives easier is justified to the extent only when viewd to its usefulness but when its usage becomes a habit or an alternative to sustain our laziness, life surely becomes cumbersome.
Firstly, technology has become an indispensable part of our lives and a moment without it creates a void in people's lives. Recently, there was no internet in my city for two days due to a prestigious examination. No one was able to use their smartphones, could not receive or send e-mails, neither could access the social networking sites nor could book the cabs for going to different places. Technology has conquered every bit of human's lives. Hence, it does has make the life complicated.
Secondly, technology's prime purpose is to simplify and solve our basic day to day problems. Lets consider the example of calculator. It reduces the time in which we do calculation and expedited efficiency. Another beautiful example is GPS. It helps know the location and even can help navigate us to different locations. Getting a cab and negotiating its price is no more a big deal. Hence, technology has made life easier in various means.
Thirdly, smartphone is the epitome of how technology facilitates and complicates at the same time. If you use the smartphone accordingly when required then it simplifies our life in a way that no other equipment can. But it becomes a pain for mostly parents, when children treat smartphone as a video game player. They stop doing their homework on time, restricts outdoor games etc and in all affect their health. Therefore, it does make it complicated when not used properly. In summary, technology does makes life complicated if we allow it to but if we could develop self-control and use it wisely, we can then only take its complete advantage without risking our health and time over technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
.... Technology has and will evolve over a period of time and there will be be thins in future wh...
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Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
...ve over a period of time and there will be be thins in future which one has not even ...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...nd solve our basic day to day problems. Lets consider the example of calculator. It ...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tates and complicates at the same time. If you use the smartphone accordingly when...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80548628429 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76412739328 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548628428928 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8266340794 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2916666667 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7083333333 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151943201758 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376712839474 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392497295038 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862444319631 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144512894775 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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