Environmental protection policies should not be applicable to corporations, which generate significant financial and economic growth,even if such growth may have a negative impact on the environment.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In
developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
The environment and any institution like the corporation or the nation are always correlated and interdependent on one another. The nation uses various resources from the nurture in order to nurture economic and financial growth along with providing the basic needs like food, shelter and clothing. Thus it is binding on the nation that they preserve the very source of their prosperity and growth.
The vast amount of population on the earth depends solely upon the natural abundances of the earth for their survival. As the population is increasing everyday, excessive burden is mounting up on the natural resources like coal, petrol, wood. The corporations which foster the most financial and economic growth are the ones most dependent on the environment because of their advancements in terms of technology as well as population. Financial and economic growth implies business, trading, manufacturing of goods which are ultimately created with the use of nature.Thus, it is but natural that these resources must be conserved and utilized properly by the corporations.
Moreover, environmental protection is the duty of every person on this earth. If corporations keep up the uncontrolled use of resources, then the day when these will be completely depleted is not too far. Thousands of trees will get cut, coal and other natural resources will be exploited.There needs to be some check on this. It can be achieved through properly planned environmental protection policies. After all every corporation is responsible for protecting the environment as it is the moral duty to protect and help what helps you.
If environmental policies are not incorporated in such corporations then the natural resources will deplete one fine day, leaving mankind in complete loss. Excessive pollution, no clear water to drink, no pure air to breathe, such problems will worsen everyday. Most of the corporations still use conventional sources as they are easier to harvest. But, they are not renewable, Also, the processes done in extracting them are polluting the nature in various ways. Thus, a controlled approach towards the financial and economic growth must be held, keeping the environment's safety in mind.
Not only the significant corporations, but in fact all the nations in the world must devise constructive policies towards nurturing the environment. These policies will not only help in protecting the environment, but also in controlling the excessive use of resources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... needs like food, shelter and clothing. Thus it is binding on the nation that they p...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...rvival. As the population is increasing everyday, excessive burden is mounting up on the...
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Suggestion: Thus
...timately created with the use of nature.Thus, it is but natural that these resources...
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Suggestion: There
...her natural resources will be exploited.There needs to be some check on this. It can ...
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Suggestion: every day
...r to breathe, such problems will worsen everyday. Most of the corporations still use con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, after all, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39331619537 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09188781971 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526992287918 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0006560667 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.421052632 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229731798826 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690688572433 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556595107812 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126437444965 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293576740911 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.