The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A government runs on the cumulative efforts of all those officers working for the nation. Still, there can be said to be a single authority of highest significance that has a control over the activities of welfare of the nation. This authority is chosen from among the members of the government's parliament. Young people are encouraged to serve and lead the nation. This encouragment is done both by imparting competition or cooperation in young people.
Cooperation is the key essence of peaceful survival of the people in any nation. With cooperation, an amity is nurtured among the residents of the nation and it helps the government to function efficiently. For example, if the leader of the government is an amicable and a cooperative person he will listen to the opinions of his ministers and do only what is best in the interests of his nation. The ministers and officers will be happy to work for the leader if they are given equal importance indecision making. Young people are energetic and full of innovative ideas which can be put to use for the benefit of the nation. If values of cooperation and sincerity are instilled in them, they would peacefully and efficiently govern the country without enmity with anyone. Sure, there is going to be a competition with someone at every step. But with the skill to handle situations with cooperation rather than argument would surely help young people to be successful leaders.
Moreover, in fields other than government leadership also cooperation will create wonders. In industries or in any other field of life, if a person learns to be cooperative and adjusting then, he will surely succeed. In industries there are many chances of clashes with coworkers or boss himself upon various issues related to work. Instilling cooperation rather than competitive approach in young people would help them to maintain a healthy work environment in the industries and they would treat their coworkers as well as subordinates with due respect. Young minds are very easily influenced. So, if right kind of values and ethics are imbibed at the right time, then the nation or the industries will benefit from these strong workforces comprising of energetic and healthy minded youth.
All this said, competition has also become an important part of life of people. It cannot be denied that competition helps to encourage the young people to be better day by day in order to be at par. If healthy competition is maintained and imparted in the monds of the youth, they will benefit from it by striving hard to be more efficient and even better as a human. For example, in an industry an additional bonus is ensured for the young leader who leads the most efficient team, then the young leaders will be encouraged and inspired to bring out the best out of their team. Thus, competition is also necessary to keep a person moving and improving.
Hence, it can be concluded that neither cooperation nor competition alone can make young leaders successful leaders in any field. But, both these factors contribute equally. Young people who know how to be in health competition with the help of cooperation will easily succeed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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A government runs on the cumulative effort...
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...is chosen from among the members of the governments parliament. Young people are encouraged...
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...is best in the interests of his nation. The ministers and officers will be happy...
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...ich can be put to use for the benefit of the nation. If values of cooperation and...
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...k environment in the industries and they would treat their coworkers as well as s...
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...ll benefit from these strong workforces comprising of energetic and healthy minded youth. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2641.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 532.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96428571429 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78242921683 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456766917293 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 827.1 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9687255226 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8148148148 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7037037037 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 10.2758426966 234% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123375426835 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038539990301 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376149053311 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744708011104 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231976167829 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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