Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws

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Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws

I believe that laws keep society as a whole. Laws set protocols through which people will adhere to social, cultural, national aspects of the nation. Laws keep people of nation under one umbrella. I think that every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey all laws those are imposed by nation or society. One cannot just ignore the laws of society. If laws are injust or old, it is a responsibility of every individual to help society or nation to make these laws better and better so no one can feel those laws are unjust.

Laws are created to regulate the working of society. Consider the fact that there are no laws. For example, if there are no laws about imigration, then people from poor countries start migrating to wealthier countries and eventually population of wealthy country will grow. To fullfil the need of this population, these wealthy contries will strieve for food and space. And finally these wealthier contries will become poor. So, to regulate this migration of people, there are laws those have created by each country. It is correct that each country have their own set of laws about imigration policy and those are not fare for every individual from other nation, but these laws are not rigid, these laws can modify according to current needs of people.

Moreover, consider example about laws related to black and white people. Some countries have laws those dominate the white people over black. These laws help white people to progress like provide good education, provide social status etc. But, when these laws were made, that time those were the needs of contries. So, as time passes and people are understanding eachother from different perspectives, these laws can be modify. Simply disobey the laws is not the comlete solution for the case.

Furthermore, consider example about reservation system for special casts in India. This reservation system allows some special casts to have seats reserved in schools, colleges, government jobs, in parlement etc. Sure, these laws were correct when India had gotten an independence because that time people from upper casts were considering these special lower class people as a slave. So, it was need of time to give some reservations to these lower cast people to make their life wealthier. But, now it is no more case in India. All people are considered to be equal. So, to just disobey these laws won't be permanent solution for this situation. People need to modify these laws according to current need of people.

By giving all reasons and examples, I believe that one cannot disobey and resist unjust laws. Instead of disobey these laws, modify these laws according to the current need of society or nation as a whole so every person from the nation or society feel justice to obey these laws.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...contries. So, as time passes and people are understanding eachother from different perspectives, ...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for example, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2327.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 472.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93008474576 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43470369181 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425847457627 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3658907285 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2413793103 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.275862069 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44827586207 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370519058091 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113890954556 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107941470579 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236112492636 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124714944656 0.0667264976115 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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