every individual in a society is responsible to obey fair laws and disobey the unfair ones
Since the dawn of civilization, society laws has played an important role in people's lives. One of the challenging questions regarding this matter is whether every individual in a society is responsible to obey fair laws and disobey the unfair ones. However, some people might agree with this statement I believe it is not true. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the most important reasons supporting my viewpoint.
The first reason to be mentioned is that all laws should be obeyed by people since they are established in congress and supported by government. In other words, all laws has been approved in congress and disobeying them has financial or other punishments. Consider president Trump as an example; he tried to engage in some actions without the vote of congress in spite of the law. However, he was not able to dictate his own decision because the law has restricted his powers as president of America. Therefore, laws should be obeyed by all citizens even president.
Besides, if any individual tries to do whatever he/she wants the society will get into a chaos. Put it differently, societies are based on the laws and if people of them do not obey the rules the society will diminish. For instance, if people try to ride in every arbitrary direction in streets of the city it is not hard to conclude that no one will be able to get the destination.
Furthermore, in our societies people have the right to engage in protests. They can show their disagreement with the laws which they believe are not just by gathering in a specific place. This way people responsible for approving the laws such as congressmen would get informed. For example couple of months ago some women in India gathered showing their objection to the laws diminishing women's power. Two days ago the congress approved some changes to the laws supporting women’s right to their bodies.
In conclusion people in society should not act on their own opposing the laws since it will result in a chaos. Moreover, people can show their objection by gatherings. In addition laws should be obeyed by people because they are approved by congress and disobeying them has punishments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76544157414 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490514905149 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7418456488 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.9 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45 5.21951772744 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331814885185 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102154252583 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134659982424 0.0758088955206 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19231249961 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992415090635 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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