The first step to self knowledge is rejection of the familiar

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The first step to self knowledge is rejection of the familiar

Self- knowledge is finding ourselves and decide to enrich our knowledge by understanding the things that are not familiar to us. To gain this self knowledge, we need to reject the familiar or comfort zone. By arguing the things will uplift our knowledge and leads us to understand a lot and lots of information.

One can gain knowledge from life experiences, academic and via parents. By what needs to take into an account is to understand the self things. You need to know yourself first. By the proverb "Self help is the best help". One must understand their needs and then only he or she can be much more interested in doing a work or job. For example, if we take Steve Jobs, Ex-Founder of the Apple. He got kicked out from the school because of his frivolity in studying. But he is interested in calligraphy. So he took a firm stand in going to that class. From there only the idea of font comes to the market. One needs to find out what is their strength and power. That idea will change their life into a beautiful one. If he does not understand his self, today he will be sitting in some office and do perfunctory working with languid thought.

Another person who inspired me was Wilma Rudolph. She is an athletic person but with a physically challenged. By doctors advising, she should not even move her leg and if that condition comes she will not be able to walk again. If she accepts the fact then she would have failed in her goal now. But she knows her self and galvanized herself to do a lot of things. She readily embraced the opportunities and become an eminent person in sports now. So one should understand themselves correctly because that paves a path and also by rejecting familiar we are already one step moved forward.

The best advice that we learn is from experiences only. The experience is the best teacher rather than an academic one. In my career, I decided to choose to write this Graduate Record Examination but not all my friends have desired to do this.I'm trying to find myself, what makes me to jump out of my bed and do the things. So that's the key to achieve the success and make a roar means you will have to stay alone, walk alone and also first learn to discover your self knowledge.

The person who knows everything about themselves will definitely fix their path and do whatever to make that happen. One should take risks in life. Because the risky thing will teach you a lot of things. Taking risks will reduce a familiar zone and leads to a destination.Totally the key to a life is to understand the self knowledge

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2114.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5364806867 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57025651852 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487124463519 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9295425254 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1935483871 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.0322580645 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38709677419 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20935637334 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481219134683 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772197645553 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122635367677 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904244697814 0.0667264976115 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 14.1392134831 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 48.8420337079 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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