As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology is the science or knowledge to put into the practical purpose to solve problems or invent useful tools.As we rely more and more on technology the ability to think will deteriorate is a negative projection of the technology. If technology creates any problem it will provide a solution to the problem. So, as we can say that the technology, our ability to think also increases only surely not decreased.
Technology is a thing that we using on our daily basis like cellphone, laptop, systems, computers, washing machines and etc.These things reduce the work by save our time. By using that time, we can do any other thing.It reduces the human power physically. In recent years,in all our houses the technology attainment rate is high. One fine invention is computer, it provides a easy way for personal as well as social welfare. It is used for basic computation at first but with the power of human brilliance its domain is drastically increased. The invention of computer gives a lot of scope and uses in nowadays.
But being travel along with the technology, there creates problem too. For solving this problems humans are promoted to think for a solution. By finding the solution, the creativity level increases.The sudden discovery of internet provides some problems, the searching helps to enlarge our mind. Hacking and loss of personal data are the problems. Automobile industry plays a vital role in our day-to-day life makes our life easier but the resources like petrol, diesel are now limited. In order to overcome, we are find the car which is run by water or solar.
As technology provides a lot of information and technical uses, people are willing to enjoy it's uses and also ready to find out the solution for the problems itself. People use according to their personal needs also.For example, if Ajay wants to travel to abroad but the weather condition is not good but has to attend the meeting tomorrow. To overcome this problem, our technology provides Facetime or Skype to participate in this meeting and sign the deal. Likewise technology provides lots and lots of good things.
In conclusion,technology cannot be ignored as well as the human creation also cannot be ignored. Tough technologies provides ways to live our life comfortably by being dependent on it but it saves quality time which can be used for progress for mental development
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...o solve problems or invent useful tools.As we rely more and more on technology the...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... negative projection of the technology. If technology creates any problem it will ...
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Suggestion: etc.
...p, systems, computers, washing machines and etc.These things reduce the work by save our...
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...ms, computers, washing machines and etc.These things reduce the work by save our time...
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...ng that time, we can do any other thing.It reduces the human power physically. In ...
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Suggestion: , in
... human power physically. In recent years,in all our houses the technology attainmen...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...fine invention is computer, it provides a easy way for personal as well as social...
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
... computer gives a lot of scope and uses in nowadays. But being travel along with the tec...
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... there creates problem too. For solving this problems humans are promoted to think f...
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Suggestion: The
...olution, the creativity level increases.The sudden discovery of internet provides s...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e use according to their personal needs also.For example, if Ajay wants to travel to...
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Suggestion: For
... according to their personal needs also.For example, if Ajay wants to travel to abr...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...ate in this meeting and sign the deal. Likewise technology provides lots and lots of go...
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Suggestion: , technology
...nd lots of good things. In conclusion,technology cannot be ignored as well as the human ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for progress for mental development
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01256281407 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82580222292 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550251256281 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8824145546 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177002244406 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540952126965 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504097806715 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104326622675 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488068152893 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.