the first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar.
The given issue " The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familar" is one of the process of enlightment too. knowledge is the important thing in human kind, without it human are nothing, they cant do anything without knowledge.
firstly, knowledge is the basic thing of all human kind and animal also,without knowledge noone can survive their life easily. self- knowledge is the most important thing than academic knowledgee; who study themselves ,they have the ability to do something without academic process ,they do own research whaat they want to do.For example, GAUTAMM BUDDHA,from nepal, one of the great person who enlightment himself by abandoning home and his family, give lesson of humanity; now we know him as the god. he know this kind of humanity and peace by self-knowledge, which still gives us the how important of peaceful world have been.
Additionally, self knowledge is also a motivation of our life for surviving in the wuorld. when we get power to do something by self knowledge then we must motivate ourself by knowing what is good or bad and we aill success in the life. for example, RAMDEV, india, one of the aurvedic philosopher who knows as autodidactic teacher:he got this knowledge himself band give alot of lesson for us in exercise and in our health problem. so, by self knowledge human survive easily and give something for world what they know without hesistation. they have nothing to fear about anything, they did their best.
At last, as mention above self knowledge is best thing for us from which we success in every part of in our life. by self knowledge we give something for this world what we know better. the issue is good that if we will be in familiar then our knowledge diverges i think. so for better result and good life self knowledge is very important than other knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Knowledge
... one of the process of enlightment too. knowledge is the important thing in human kind, w...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ind, without it human are nothing, they cant do anything without knowledge. first...
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... cant do anything without knowledge. firstly, knowledge is the basic thing of all hu...
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... thing of all human kind and animal also,without knowledge noone can survive their life ...
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...ge noone can survive their life easily. self- knowledge is the most important thing ...
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...cademic knowledgee; who study themselves ,they have the ability to do something wi...
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...to do something without academic process ,they do own research whaat they want to ...
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...y do own research whaat they want to do.For example, GAUTAMM BUDDHA,from nepal, one...
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...y want to do.For example, GAUTAMM BUDDHA,from nepal, one of the great person who enli...
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...mself by abandoning home and his family, give lesson of humanity; now we know him...
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...f humanity; now we know him as the god. he know this kind of humanity and peace by...
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Suggestion: knows
...umanity; now we know him as the god. he know this kind of humanity and peace by self...
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...by self-knowledge, which still gives us the how important of peaceful world have been. ...
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...f our life for surviving in the wuorld. when we get power to do something by self kn...
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...or bad and we aill success in the life. for example, RAMDEV, india, one of the aurv...
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... in exercise and in our health problem. so, by self knowledge human survive easily...
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...rld what they know without hesistation. they have nothing to fear about anything, th...
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...t last, as mention above self knowledge is best thing for us from which we success in e...
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...e success in every part of in our life. by self knowledge we give something for th...
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...ing for this world what we know better. the issue is good that if we will be in fam...
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...in familiar then our knowledge diverges i think. so for better result and good li...
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...ar then our knowledge diverges i think. so for better result and good life self kn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, still, then, for example, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87658227848 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70066153836 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51582278481 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.996054318 60.3974514979 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26876823757 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109804450773 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830087057794 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183244575317 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698519685968 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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